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Nowadays many people drive to work. It causes more traffic accidents. As students, how can we do to guarantee our safe？First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, don't forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it is the danger to us to wear headphones while we're walking or cycling. Since we can't pay enough attention on the traffic around us, an accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and don't let our parents worry about them.

假如你是李华，你有一位名叫Jack的英国笔友。最近，他在给你的一封信中提到，他参加的学校足球队在一场十分重要的比赛中失利，从而错过了赢得冠军的机会，因此他的心情非常低落。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，帮助他走出目前的困境。

描述问题	1. 比赛失利；2. 错过机会；3. 情绪低落
分析问题	1. 表示理解；2. 对待输赢的态度；3. 过程比结果更重要
建议和愿望	1. 汲取教训；2. 重树信心；3. ……

 
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Dear Jack，
After reading your letter， I know that_____________________________________________________________
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Yours truly，

Li Hua

假如你是李明，昨天学校组织你班学生去东方红化工厂参观，你发现工厂附近的环境受到了严重污染，河水污浊不堪，于是决定写一封信给China Daily投稿，呼吁政府加强对工厂的管理，要求工厂采取措施处理污染，保护环境。
内容：1. 描述你所看到的情况；
2. 发表你的看法。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,

I’m sorry to trouble you, but _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!

Yours,

Li Ming

   One of the best feelings is opening the acceptance letter from a university. As we all know, college is expensive. Throughout most college students’ lives they had almost all their money given to them by their parents. But college is the time true responsibility begins. With the right information at hand, you can definitely get major financial assistance for college tuition（学费）.【小题1】

Play a Sport

Some of the highest scholarships are given to college athletes, especially to the football player or baseball player, but do you know you can get scholarships for less known sports? 【小题2】 A senior year spent learning a new sport and perfecting the skills can lead to a full scholarship in college.

Volunteer

Most nonprofit organizations offer high scholarships to their volunteers. Try volunteering in your community, or a branch of major organizations. 【小题3】 It can be best to work for an organization that you are familiar with.

【小题4】

Try building a personal connection with someone at a scholarship society. Building a relationship through visits and phone calls can make you stand out of the crowd. Remember, these people go through hundreds of applications（申请）a day — and a personal touch can really make a difference!

Apply Early

It can never be too early to apply for a scholarship. Applying early is another way to stand out of the crowd. 【小题5】It can also be a numbers game. Applying early can lead to more applications altogether, and someone who applies to 100 scholarships has a much better chance!

A．Keep in Contact

B．Recognize Your Background

C．Try taking part in golf, or horse-riding!

D．There are so many scholarships available to women or people of color.

E．Experience has proven that scholarships will be given to those that deserve them.

F．You can definitely score a better scholarship earlier, with much less competition.

G．A high level of community service will help you a lot in college and will be helpful for future careers.