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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有
10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处)不计分
Several days before, I was out with my friends at a local fast food restaurant. The food we ate was good but we had fun together. Before we left for the restaurant, we found that it also sold ice cream. We got exciting because we hadn’t eaten ice cream for a long time. One of my friend decided to buy all of us ice cream and in the restaurant, they all screamed (尖叫) with joy! Then the man came in with his son, who wanted to buy ice cream either. In the end, he decides to pay for our ice cream. We moved by such an act of kindness on a hot day.
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同类题1

It was a beautiful morning, though every morning was beautiful. And I think that morning was ______. As usual I ______ myself for office, locked my room and stepped outside from my hostel(宿舍). Suddenly, I saw two poor kids ______ under a tree, shivering(颤抖) and ______ people as they were passing by.
I could see the light in their eyes, smile on their faces, as they were ______ watching people. I went to them and asked ______ they were sitting over there and where their house was. They ______ in their childish voice that their ______ was nearby, and that they were sitting there because sometimes people gave them ______ or gave them money.
It was ______, but I could feel their ______ of getting something was still alive.
I told them to stay there and I ______ to hostel’s canteen, packed some food and gave them to those children. Their faces were covered completely with ______ and they started eating ______. I also gave them few packets of biscuits and told them to go home, ______ them with their family. They ______ me with smile and said goodbye to me. I was feeling extremely happy that I could at ______ give them some food that of course wouldn’t fill their stomach or ______ their needs, but could give them a little strength. I ______ want to give the two little hearts some ______ on a cold morning.
【小题1】
A.specialB.snowyC.coldD.usual
【小题2】
A.orderedB.advisedC.preparedD.arranged
【小题3】
A.playingB.sittingC.readingD.crying
【小题4】
A.looing atB.laughing atC.galring atD.staring at
【小题5】
A.fortunatelyB.silentlyC.patientlyD.calmly
【小题6】
A.howB.whetherC.whenD.why
【小题7】
A.repliedB.apologizedC.agreedD.promised
【小题8】
A.schoolB.homeC.parentsD.kindergarten
【小题9】
A.booksB.fruitC.foodD.toys
【小题10】
A.terribleB.sadC.hopelessD.freezing
【小题11】
A.needB.chanceC.honorD.hope
【小题12】
A.pointedB.decidedC.escapedD.returned
【小题13】
A.joyB.surpriseC.sadnessD.worry
【小题14】
A.finallyB.timelyC.hurriedlyD.gradually
【小题15】
A.discussingB.sharingC.keepingD.collecting
【小题16】
A.respondedB.praisedC.answeredD.thanked
【小题17】
A.lastB.firstC.leastD.most
【小题18】
A.improveB.discoverC.satisfyD.keep
【小题19】
A.reallyB.totallyC.completelyD.partly
【小题20】
A.supportB.praiseC.warmthD.information

同类题2

I was shopping in the supermarket when I heard a young voice. “Mom, come here! There’s a lady here my size!” The mother rushed to her son; then she turned to me to apologize. I smiled and told her, “It’s okay.” Then talked to the boy, “Hi, I’m Darry Kramer. How are you?” He studied me from head to toe, and asked, “Are you a little mommy?” “Yes, I have a son,” I answered. “Why are you so little?” he asked. “It’s the way I was born,” I said. “Some people are little. Some are tall. I’m just not going to grow any bigger.” After I answered his other questions, I shook the boy’s hand and left.
My life as a little person is filled with stories like that. I enjoy talking to children and explaining why I look different from their parents.
It takes only one glance to see my uniqueness. I stand three feet nine inches tall. I was born an achondroplasia dwarf (侏儒). Despite this, I did all the things other kids did when I was growing up.
I didn’t realize how short I was until I started school. Some kids joked on me, calling me names. Then I knew. I began to hate the first day of school each year. New students would always stare at me as I struggled to climb the school bus stairs.
But I learned to smile and accept the fact that I was going to be noticed my whole life. I decided to make my uniqueness an advantage rather than a disadvantage. What I lacked in height, I made up for in personality.
I’m 47 now, and the stares have notdiminishedas I’ve grown older. People are amazed when they see me driving. I try to keep a good attitude. When people are rude, I remind myself, “Look what else I have--a great family, nice friends.”
It’s the children’s questions that make my life special. I enjoy answering their questions. My hope is that I will encourage them to accept their peers (a person of the same age, class, position, etc.), whatever size and shape they come in, and treat them with respect.
【小题1】Why did the mother apologize to the author?
A.Because the boy studied the author from head to toe.
B.Because the boy laughed at the author.
C.Because they boy said the author was shorter than him.
D.Because the mother thought the boy’s words had hurt the author.
【小题2】When did the author realize that she was too short?
A.When she grew up.
B.When she began to go to school.
C.When she was 47 years old.
D.When she met the boy in the supermarket.
【小题3】Which of the following word can best replace the underlined word “diminished”?
A.doubtedB.decreased
C.remainedD.improved
【小题4】Which is NOT true about the author according to the passage?
A.She suffered lots of discrimination when growing up.
B.She is grateful for what she has.
C.She doesn’t see herself different.
D.She thinks people should be treated equally.

同类题4

Earlier this year, my family experienced an unexpected tragedy. The kind of tragedy which knocks you out of yourself and turns your whole world upside down. A tragedy which also caused me to be out of work for three months. It was completely unforeseen and I had no time to put together an out-of-office plan.
I’ve worked at previous companies where this kind of tragedy would have been handled professionally; I would have been given the legally—required money and asked to leave. But at SAS Institute (an American developer of analytics software), my team stepped in and filled in with no questions or hesitations. My work was not left undone. My clients (客户) were patient when those picking up the pieces of projects unrelated to them needed some time to get familiar with the work. My management and colleagues checked on my family regularly. At last, my manager, my entire team and Human Resources Department helped me back to work at my own pace. They even changed my workspace over a weekend to better suit my personal needs before I even came back to work.
You see, SAS—creates—a—family. The special attention to employee happiness and work/life balance makes that family possible. The flexible work environment enables most employees to create a schedule that best suits their personal needs—whether it’s attending a school play or taking an aging parent to the doctor. The Work/Life Office has a wealth of resources for college planning, anger management, sorrow, etc. But, as you can see, it doesn’t stop there. Most employees believe that SAS is their family. We rely on each other. We help each other succeed. We celebrate team successes. We hang out after work. Our kids play together. We laugh together and cry together.
Sure, we have a lot of convenience benefits at SAS. But, what really makes a difference to me is the SAS culture that the outside world doesn’t always see: The balance. The companionship. The management support. The family it allows me to have.
I’m so eager for others to see the side of SAS that I see every day.
【小题1】After the tragedy, the author .
A.changed his jobB.felt very hopeless
C.was sick for three monthsD.turned to his colleagues for help
【小题2】What did the author’s colleagues do for him during his absence?
A.They raised money to help him.
B.They visited his family every weekend.
C.They asked his clients to wait for him to return.
D.They moved his office desk to a convenient place.
【小题3】By saying the underlined words “SAS creates a family” in Paragraph 3, the author means .
A.the employees feel at home at SAS
B.SAS often organizes family get-togethers
C.many SAS employees have become couples
D.the offices at SAS are decorated like families
【小题4】The author writes the text mainly to .
A.tell his life experienceB.introduce SAS culture
C.encourage people to join SASD.explain the importance of family

同类题5

   So let’s say that you’re sitting at a restaurant and when your food arrives, you take one bite and decide that something is preventing you from taking a second bite. No matter what the reason is, this dish is going back to the kitchen, and now it’s up to you to find a way to send it back politely.

First of all, the single most important thing to do when you’re sending something back is to do it immediately. If you eat half the dish before sending it back, the server and kitchen will believe that you really don’t need to send it back.

If a dish is too salty that it cannot be eaten, you should first let the server know what the situation is, and they’ll take it back to the kitchen and bring you a new one. Remember that it is not the server’s fault, so don’t take it out on them. Also, don’t be afraid that they’ll get angry at you, or someone will spit (吐) in your food. It’s their job to make sure that you’re satisfied, and if the kitchen clearly makes a mistake the server will be frustrated with the kitchen, not with the diner who has been served an inedible meal. A new dish will be cooked, and nobody’s going to spit in it.

There is, however, one example when you are sending back a dish which will really annoy both the server and the kitchen. If you order a pasta dish that contains pancetta but then send it back to the kitchen because you’re a vegetarian (素食者) and don’t know what pancetta is, and then congratulations because you’re one of the most unbearable types of customers a restaurant can have. A perfectly good plate of food is just thrown out because you don’t ask what pancetta is before ordering.

So the bottom line: Use common sense if you think that you need to send your dish back. If the kitchen do something wrong, then they’re on the hook for a new plate of food. If you do something wrong, then hopefully you’ve learned a lesson.

【小题1】When the diners find something wrong with the dishes they ordered, they should __________ .
A.send them back immediatelyB.eat half the dishes before sending them back
C.go back to the kitchen themselvesD.wait until the cook apologizes to them
【小题2】The underlined word “inedible” in Paragraph 3 can be replaced by “ __________”.
A.unbearableB.unpleasant
C.tastelessD.uneatable
【小题3】What will happen when you are sending back a dish owing to your own mistake?
A.You’ll be fined by the restaurant.
B.Your request will be refused immediately.
C.You’ll be forced to leave the restaurant.
D.Your food will be thrown out of the restaurant.
【小题4】The passage is intended to __________.
A.guide diners how to enjoy a good meal in a restaurant
B.introduce the best way to send back food in a restaurant
C.introduce the bottom line people should have in a restaurant
D.inform the diners of the most important things to do in a restaurant