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I tried a new lifestyle. I gave up the Internet, but even didn’t watch TV. I thought I would feel very boring. However, I had very different day. I wrote two article that morning. In the past, I always want to write one, but I didn’t have time. While I was separated from the Net and TV, I could devote me to writing. I once read an article, that said that every morning the writer spent two hours write without the Net. At that time, I thought of she was too strict. After I tried the method myself, I found it real worthwhile.

同学们即将进入高三, 为了保证有充足的学习时间, 一些学生打算搬出学生宿舍, 在学校附近租房。请就这一现象写一篇英语短文向某英语报社投稿。内容包括:
1. 在校外租房的利与弊;
2. 你的看法, 并陈述你的理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已为你写好, 不计人总词数。
参考词汇:学生宿舍dormitory
With the senior year of high school approaching,
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It isn't hard for everyone to grow up into a responsible members of society.

I can well remember an accident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, what drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Lucky she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am pride of what I did.

As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

假如你是李华，你有一位名叫Jack的英国笔友。最近，他在给你的一封信中提到，他参加的学校足球队在一场十分重要的比赛中失利，从而错过了赢得冠军的机会，因此他的心情非常低落。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，帮助他走出目前的困境。

描述问题	1. 比赛失利；2. 错过机会；3. 情绪低落
分析问题	1. 表示理解；2. 对待输赢的态度；3. 过程比结果更重要
建议和愿望	1. 汲取教训；2. 重树信心；3. ……

 
注意:1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
After reading your letter， I know that_____________________________________________________________
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Yours truly，

Li Hua

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Dear Mr. White,

I am writing tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school hold a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won a first place. In my view, it is your kind help which has helped me gain the achievement. During your spare time, you often spent such much time helping me with my speaking English that I made rapid progress. In the competition, I followed your advices on how to behave, which led to my success. I'm grateful to you for your help and decide that you will make more efforts and try to make great progress in the future.

I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua