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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请按下列要求改正:
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Tom’s 70th birthday, but there is anybody with him. He feels very disappointing. His sons didn’t care for him on this special day. Although the cakes are very delicious, but he doesn’t want to touch it. He just wants his children come and see him. Nowadays, many young people are so busy and independent which they seldom visit their parents. But blood is thick than water. Our dear parents brought us up for a lot of difficulty. Thus, we should and must bring happy to them when they become old.
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同类题1

   Many years ago, Dad worked as a farmhand (农场工人). At that time, he had a horse. Every Saturday he________to the town after dinner and spent a few hours on social________ with other farmhands, such as drinking, chatting, and playing cards in the café. On Saturday evenings, the café was ________ because many farmhands were there. Before midnight Dad returned home on his horse, quite satisfied with his________. In his words, he________ thought of changing his job.

At the age of 31, Dad married my mother who was a schoolteacher. In the following spring I came________ into the world. Life became hard, so my mother felt________. She told Dad that they must make a ________.

My mother had ________of how some famous persons, especially Thomas Edison who was born in a poor family, fought against fate and achieved greatness and ________. And she ________ that I would some day become a great leader ________ men or cities and Dad should be a successful businessman. So she ________Dad to give up his job as a farmhand, sell his horse and ________a small business of his own. And I went to high school and college. She even sent me abroad for ________ education when I graduated from college. Under the drive of my mother's hope, Dad and I________what we have today. Dad runs a big international ________and I am a successful lawyer ________great fame in my country, ________not a leader as my mother expected.

Dad said, without my mother, we wouldn't be what we are today; at least, he would remain a farmhand. ________ he got a lesson of life —sometimes we really need drive from outside.

【小题1】
A.rodeB.walkedC.ranD.drove
【小题2】
A.conversationsB.gamesC.relationshipsD.activities
【小题3】
A.coldB.crowdedC.quietD.dirty
【小题4】
A.horseB.entertainmentC.lifeD.beer
【小题5】
A.oftenB.everC.neverD.sometimes
【小题6】
A.laughingB.singingC.sleepingD.crying
【小题7】
A.unimportantB.busyC.unsatisfiedD.tired
【小题8】
A.livingB.changeC.decisionD.house
【小题9】
A.dreamedB.heardC.thoughtD.spoken
【小题10】
A.honestyB.moneyC.fameD.energy
【小题11】
A.caredB.knewC.forgotD.hoped
【小题12】
A.trainingB.rulingC.helpingD.protecting
【小题13】
A.warnedB.wantedC.allowedD.persuaded
【小题14】
A.startB.findC.designD.sell
【小题15】
A.fartherB.higherC.easierD.closer
【小题16】
A.showedB.keptC.lostD.achieved
【小题17】
A.companyB.schoolC.farmD.café
【小题18】
A.sufferingB.sharingC.enjoyingD.following
【小题19】
A.thoughB.ifC.andD.since
【小题20】
A.SoB.HoweverC.OrD.Because

同类题2

   Across Britain, burnt toast will be served to mothers in bed this morning as older sons and daughters rush to deliver their supermarket bunches of flowers. But, according to a new study, we should be placing a higher value on motherhood all year.
Mothers have long known that their home workload was just as heavy as paid work. Now, the new study has shown that if they were paid for their parental labours, they would earn as much as $ 172,000 a year.
The study looked at the range of jobs mothers do, as well as the hours they are working, to determine the figure. This would make their yearly income $ 30,000 more than the Prime Minister earns.
By analysing the numbers, it found the average mother works 119 hours a week, 40 of which would usually be paid at a standard rate and 79 hours as overtime. After questioning 1,000 mothers with children under 18, it found that, on most days, mums started their routine work at 7am and finished at around 11pm.
To calculate just how much mothers would earn from that labour, it suggested some of the roles that mums could take on, including housekeeper, part-time lawyer, personal trainer and entertainer. Being a part-time lawyer, at £ 48.98 an hour, would prove to be the most profitable of the “mum jobs”, with psychologist (心理学家) a close second.
It also asked mothers about the challenges they face, with 80 percent making emotional demand as the hardest thing about motherhood.
Over a third of .mums felt they needed more training and around half said they missed going out with friends.
The study shows mothers matter all year long and not just on Mother’s Day. The emotional, physical and mental energy mothers devote to their, children can be never-ending, but children are also sources of great joy and happiness. Investing (投入) in time for parenting and raising relationships is money well spent.
【小题1】How much would a mother earn a year if working as the Prime Minister?
A.£ 30,000.B.£ 142,000.
C.£ 172,000.D.£ 202,000.
【小题2】The biggest challenge for most mothers is from .
A.emotional demandB.low pay for work
C.heavy workloadD.lack of training
【小题3】What is stressed in the last paragraph?
A.Mothers’ importance shows in family all year long.
B.The sacrifices mothers make are huge but worthwhile.
C.Mothers’ devotion to children can hardly be calculated.
D.Investing time in parenting would bring a financial return.
【小题4】What can we conclude from the study?
A.Mothers,working hours should be largely reduced.
B.Mothers should balance their time for work and rest.
C.Mothers’ labour is of a higher value than it is realised.
D.Mothers should be freed from housework for social life.

同类题3

   When we got ready to go to the rink (溜冰场), Mom always helped me tie up my skates. Then she _____ her own. Mom and I had been coming to the rink every _____ since my lessons began. That was our deal. I went to _____ on Tuesdays, and we skated together on Sundays.

When we were ready to _____ on the ice, Mom took my hand and put an arm around my shoulder. I looked up at Mom and smiled. She seemed _____ but still smiled back. I took a short gliding (滑行) step, and she stepped with me, holding my hand tight. We went across the rink very _____ After a few minutes, we _____ in the center of the rink. I gently took my _____ back from Mom’s and glided slowly away.

While Mom stood still, I _____ the move my teacher taught me this week. I put one foot on the ______ , leaning forward a little. I slowly raised my back foot as ______ as I could behind me. I stopped and ______ a moment when some bigger kids skated quickly by. OK, Mom. It’s ______ for you to skate alone,” I said. “In fact, there is ______ to be afraid of. Skating alone is no ______ than skating with me.”

Then I did what my teacher did when he was teaching a ______ skater. “ Watch my face, Mom,” I said. “Not your feet. Now, step.” She took a baby step and ______ We stayed until Mom could skate across the rink three times by herself. When she was ______ , she glided over to me and gave me a big hug. “I ______ you could do it,” I said.

She smiled and said, “I couldn’t have done it without my excellent ______.”

【小题1】
A.took offB.put onC.looked forD.threw away
【小题2】
A.FridayB.dayC.yearD.Sunday
【小题3】
A.lessonsB.partiesC.churchD.theatres
【小题4】
A.danceB.jumpC.skateD.skip
【小题5】
A.nervousB.surprisedC.angryD.disappointed
【小题6】
A.rapidlyB.carelesslyC.officiallyD.slowly
【小题7】
A.changedB.stoppedC.startedD.disappeared
【小题8】
A.bagB.shoesC.clothesD.hand
【小题9】
A.taughtB.combinedC.triedD.forgot
【小题10】
A.iceB.floorC.groundD.grass
【小题11】
A.longB.highC.lowD.fast
【小题12】
A.waitedB.spentC.sparedD.killed
【小题13】
A.adviceB.supportC.newsD.time
【小题14】
A.anythingB.somethingC.nothingD.everything
【小题15】
A.easierB.harderC.betterD.happier
【小题16】
A.uniqueB.cleverC.creativeD.new
【小题17】
A.continuedB.quitC.rejectedD.fell
【小题18】
A.stressedB.calmC.independentD.active
【小题19】
A.rememberedB.knewC.agreedD.heard
【小题20】
A.neighborB.studentC.teacherD.boss

同类题4

   Years ago my three-year-old son, Jeremy, and I walked to our car. He _______ me with excitement. I found he was holding a _______ in his little hand. I hadn’t given it to him, so I asked, “Where did you get that?” He _______ to the store we’d just _______. But we hadn’t paid for it.

I had a lot of things to do that day, but taking _______ of this moment to teach character to my son just moved to the _______ of my to-do list. I sat him in the front seat next to me in the car without _______ it, so the two of us could talk. I _______ to him that we couldn’t just take things from stores without _______ them. When he realized he’d done wrong, tears ________ up in his eyes. I looked at my ________ boy and said, “Here’s what we have to do. We have to go back to the ________. I want you to tell the manager that you took it, and you’re sorry.” We walked back to the store, and I asked for the ________. “My son has something to tell you,” I told her. Jeremy ________ the toy and said, “I took this, and I’m sorry.” The manager ________ it beautifully, and a little boy learned an important ________.

My son is now 40, with children of his own, but he still clearly ________ that day. And, now, I’m so ________ that those character traits I tried to teach him took ________ in his heart and life. He’s now teaching them to my beloved ________.

We can impact our world by teaching our children character-by being examples of them.

【小题1】
A.looked up atB.looked down onC.took care ofD.paid attention to
【小题2】
A.sweetB.bookC.toyD.coin
【小题3】
A.contributedB.turnedC.ledD.pointed
【小题4】
A.seenB.passedC.exitedD.approached
【小题5】
A.advantageB.careC.controlD.charge
【小题6】
A.topB.tipC.backD.bottom
【小题7】
A.parkingB.startingC.sellingD.using
【小题8】
A.announcedB.reportedC.declaredD.explained
【小题9】
A.handing overB.paying forC.packing upD.taking away
【小题10】
A.welledB.heldC.driedD.dropped
【小题11】
A.naughtyB.badC.preciousD.handsome
【小题12】
A.officeB.hospitalC.carD.store
【小题13】
A.assistantB.managerC.salesgirlD.shopkeeper
【小题14】
A.worked outB.figured outC.gave outD.held out
【小题15】
A.exposedB.handledC.admittedD.complained
【小题16】
A.courseB.programC.lessonD.example
【小题17】
A.remembersB.realizesC.recognizesD.respects
【小题18】
A.hopefulB.gratefulC.cautiousD.certain
【小题19】
A.placeB.actionC.rootD.effect
【小题20】
A.studentsB.friendsC.neighborsD.grandchildren

同类题5

   It was Christmas evening. I just _______ home from the nearby grocery store with all kinds of things. The kitchen was _______ with brown bags and boxes. On seeing me coming back, my youngest son, Isaiah, reached me and _______ if I would play a game with him.

I took Isaiah's _______ . He stood there and his green eyes were _______ . “Here is a Christmas _______   for you. Please find it. You can look for something silver. ” he said. I began to do it. I _______ the table in the corner and some other places.

After a few seconds, I saw there was a _______ snow globe on the top of the piano. It was silvery and beautiful. I held the cool _______ in my hands. Isaiah said to me that it was to ________ the one that he had broken the year before. I was puzzled completely. So I bent(弯曲) my ________ beside him. He added how he ________ enough money and asked his elder brother,Logan, to help him buy this one to ________ the broken one. They just wanted to give me a (n) ________ .

Logan nodded and smiled. When I ________ the key on the bottom of the globe, the quiet room was full of music. Isaiah said,“Mum, do you remember how I by accident ________ your snow globe? It broke on the ground ________ the music was still going on. I was so,so sad. ”His face turned a little ________ . But the truth was that I did not quite ________ the broken snow globe after a long time. But Isaiah had been sorry for his ________ all the time. I was sure I would keep this snow globe in my mind forever.

【小题1】
A.arrangedB.leftC.cleanedD.returned
【小题2】
A.filledB.loadedC.providedD.covered
【小题3】
A.decidedB.orderedC.beggedD.explained
【小题4】
A.questionB.adviceC.choiceD.time
【小题5】
A.beautifulB.sadC.sleepyD.bright
【小题6】
A.cardB.giftC.cakeD.song
【小题7】
A.searchedB.removedC.laidD.prepared
【小题8】
A.second-handB.familiarC.littleD.new
【小题9】
A.globeB.bagC.snowD.box
【小题10】
A.compete againstB.put up withC.seek forD.make up for
【小题11】
A.handsB.neckC.kneesD.waist
【小题12】
A.foundB.hidC.savedD.collected
【小题13】
A.replaceB.decorateC.repairD.improve
【小题14】
A.surpriseB.honorC.wonderD.apology
【小题15】
A.heldB.fetchedC.turnedD.changed
【小题16】
A.droppedB.escapedC.lostD.noticed
【小题17】
A.ifB.orC.butD.so
【小题18】
A.happyB.redC.confusedD.pale
【小题19】
A.valueB.rememberC.acceptD.forget
【小题20】
A.weaknessB.lossC.carelessnessD.behavior