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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请按下列要求改正:
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Tom’s 70th birthday, but there is anybody with him. He feels very disappointing. His sons didn’t care for him on this special day. Although the cakes are very delicious, but he doesn’t want to touch it. He just wants his children come and see him. Nowadays, many young people are so busy and independent which they seldom visit their parents. But blood is thick than water. Our dear parents brought us up for a lot of difficulty. Thus, we should and must bring happy to them when they become old.
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同类题1

   It's said that you don't know a man until you walk a mile in his shoes. And you also don't know what it's like for old people to travel until you accompany(陪伴)one on a trip.

After flying with my elderly father from Washington, D.C.to L.A.in July, I began to realize that a companion has important tasks that can make a journey easier for old people. I booked nonstop tickets on JetBlue to avoid tiring, confusing connections, and we flew directly into Long Beach Airport. Even though my father could walk, I arranged with the airline for wheelchair assistance, which meant we got on board first.

When I took him back to the airport for his return flight to Washington, I got permission from JetBlue to wait with him at the gate instead of saying goodbye at the security checkpoint. I wished he'd had a first-class seat and access to a comfortable airline club. Better yet, I wished I had flown with him on both ways. As I watched the attendant wheel him to the lift that would take him from the tarmac(停机坪)to the plane, I felt like an anxious mom sending her child to school for the first time.

Things can go awry on a plane trip. And then there is a horrifying story about Joe and Margie. When they landed at Dallas-Fort Worth International Airport, a wheelchair attendant met them to help with a connection. But somehow Margie, who had Alzheimer's disease, disappeared.

I didn't need to worry about my father's wandering away;at 82, his mind was sharper than mine. But his hearing was poor, so I worried about what would happen if he missed an important announcement.

Fortunately, everything went just fine. A good arrangement(安排)made the trip successful.

Next time I travel with a senior, I'll know better. I hope there will be a next time.

【小题1】Why did the author buy nonstop tickets?
A.His father was tired of flights.
B.He had important tasks to do.
C.He cared about his father.
D.His schedule was tight.
【小题2】How did the author feel when seeing his father off?
A.Disappointed.B.Worried.
C.Delighted.D.Sad.
【小题3】Which of the following can replace the underlined part "go awry" in Paragraph 4?
A.Be amused.
B.Carry on as usual.
C.Live up to one's expectation.
D.Be away from the correct course.
【小题4】What can we learn from Paragraph 5?
A.Taking a trip does great good to seniors.
B.It is a pleasant experience to travel with seniors.
C.To have a long journey with seniors is unpractical.
D.Careful planning ensures seniors to take a nice trip.

同类题4

   Super-dad Alan Lawrence,a photographer from Utah,has posted some amazing photos of his son flying in the air.

Lawrence said his two-year-old _____ Wil was born with a terrible disease — Down Syndrome,_____Lawrence is determined that this won't _____ him back in life.

When Wil was little,he would lie on his stomach and _____ his arms and legs like he was flying. “It wasn't something any of my other _____ did. My family would always _____ that he was trying so hard that one day he would start _____ ,”Lawrence told USA TODAY.

He decided to make Wi's flight a _____ by using Photoshop to create images of Wil hovering(盘旋)_____ places the family had visited.

The series of ______ ,called“Wil Can Fly”,is part of a 2016 calendar,with half the earnings from sales donated to two Down Syndrome funds.“The series ______ a reminder that people with Down Syndrome can do ______ they set their minds to,”Lawrence said.

Though appearing happy,Alan admitted that he and his wife didn't always feel so ______.“After the doctor informed us that he had Down Syndrome,we had ______. We weren't quite sure what the ______ held for our family,and we were ______ and knew very little about what to expect.”

However,these fears soon ______ once Wil was born. Alan explained:“In the short two years since he ______ ,he has helped our family grow in ways we didn't realize we needed. Our family with Wil is happy.”

And now they' re on their way to ______ this love and knowledge, saying“We want to show the world that you can have a ______ life with a child with Down Syndrome.”

【小题1】
A.sonB.nephewC.grandsonD.daughter
【小题2】
A.soB.orC.butD.and
【小题3】
A.stepB.holdC.turnD.fall
【小题4】
A.touchB.foldC.hurtD.raise
【小题5】
A.petsB.kidsC.colleaguesD.friends
【小题6】
A.explainB.argueC.complainD.joke
【小题7】
A.readingB.walkingC.flyingD.speaking
【小题8】
A.realityB.competitionC.gameD.story
【小题9】
A.aboveB.intoC.nearbyD.towards
【小题10】
A.booksB.photosC.articlesD.reports
【小题11】
A.searches forB.goes withC.makes upD.serves as
【小题12】
A.muchB.littleC.nothingD.anything
【小题13】
A.honestB.optimisticC.friendlyD.independent
【小题14】
A.researchedB.struggledC.quarreledD.behaved
【小题15】
A.newsB.hospitalC.futureD.illness
【小题16】
A.scaredB.interestedC.delightedD.satisfied
【小题17】
A.cameB.increasedC.disappearedD.gathered
【小题18】
A.arrivedB.stoppedC.leftD.returned
【小题19】
A.enjoyB.expressC.shareD.exchange
【小题20】
A.longB.poorC.personalD.happy

同类题5

   I grew up on a 10-acre farm in the small rural community of Catawissa,Missouri,as the sixth of seven children. My parents,Archie and Altha,often _________ during meals how everything on the table came from the _________.

Besides running the farm,Dad was also a _________. in the fall of 1970,he was working on a house when the ladder broke all at once. His back was fractured(折断)in two places and _________ needed rescue.

He stayed in the hospital for three weeks,_________his back to be treated correctly so the bones would _________ perfectly.

On Thanksgiving Day,Dad was still in the hospital. We always _________ pigs the day after the holiday so that we had enough pork _________for the next year,and that year my uncle _________ with a couple of cousins to help my three older brothers prepare our year's supply.

After Dad returned home,he was in a back brace and saddened for __________ to work. Worse still,the doctor told us his chance of complete recovery was __________. I was too young to realize our family had no __________ coming in as Christmas approached.

One night we heard a car coming up the long driveway. Always __________ about company(客人),we kids were curious about who was visiting.

Peggy Phelan was at the door,holding an envelope __________ with money which,according to her account,she had __________ in the community. And she was there to __________ it!

Dad tried to __________ but Peggy would have none of it. I can still hear her saying,"Archie,whenever someone's baler(压捆机)is broken,you bale their hay. Every time someone passes away,Altha is cooking. It's our __________."

That evening,I understood what being a good neighbor was,and that __________ my parents were good neighbors, their __________ would be paid back.

【小题1】
A.confirmedB.arguedC.notedD.quarreled
【小题2】
A.landB.hillC.woodD.river
【小题3】
A.cookB.carpenterC.clerkD.driver
【小题4】
A.surprisinglyB.fortunatelyC.terriblyD.gratefully
【小题5】
A.remindingB.toleratingC.forbiddingD.allowing
【小题6】
A.breakB.healC.functionD.change
【小题7】
A.raisedB.butcheredC.droveD.caught
【小题8】
A.in chargeB.in storeC.in demandD.in nature
【小题9】
A.called upB.picked upC.showed upD.came up
【小题10】
A.refusalB.inabilityC.commitmentD.anxiety
【小题11】
A.largeB.slimC.clearD.possible
【小题12】
A.moneyB.informationC.giftsD.guests
【小题13】
A.doubtfulB.enthusiasticC.worriedD.curious
【小题14】
A.stuffedB.burdenedC.chargedD.covered
【小题15】
A.accumulatedB.collectedC.appealedD.contacted
【小题16】
A.divideB.spendC.protectD.deliver
【小题17】
A.denyB.admitC.refuseD.receive
【小题18】
A.effortB.heartC.turnD.promise
【小题19】
A.becauseB.unlessC.untilD.although
【小题20】
A.debtB.kindnessC.envelopeD.prayer