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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Music and songs play a important part in our daily life. For example, they can bring we pleasure and make us happy. However, they can help us improve our study efficiency. I was fond of listening to songs and music very much, but my favorite song is Country Road. The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that I am loved and cared by my Grandma. What's more, they make me think of my wonderful childhood was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with young fellow. In a word, once enjoying, the song will never be forgotten.
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同类题1

   I like music so much that I believe I can't live without it. I was once asked by a friend of mine why I took such a great interest in it. First I would like to go deep into my soul and find myself through the music I like. Actually,some people call it the process of looking for the purpose of life,but I consider it to find my own spirit rather than the purpose of life. And the other reason is that I can communicate with other people and share all the things we have with the help of music. In fact,the use of music as a communication tool has been kept by human beings for thousands of years.

My friend asked me for further explanation after hearing what I said. I told him that this can date back to the original time,and to the very beginning of the world. At the very beginning of human beings,our forerunners(先驱)already had a special hobby of music. You'll know exactly what I mean if you happen to know the musical sentence when Adam,the first man,said to the first woman Eve,“Madam,I'm Adam”,which may have the meaning when you read from the end to the beginning. Later on,Adam and Eve and their children began to enjoy the sound of nature as a result of the special hobby of music. They found interest in listening to the sound of wind and rain, the singing of birds, the howls of beasts as well as the simple songs they themselves made.

As time went by, people started to form different kinds of music, such as Eastern music, pop music, rock and roll and light music. People became more skillful at enjoying the music. They were not just paying attention to the words and melodies, but they went deep into the soul of a piece of music. They began to know the relationship between music and their own life. They realized the power of music and started to use music to show their feelings and emotions. At the same time, people who listened to music and found the right way of enjoying it were going deeper and deeper into their soul and spirit through music. They got the whole colourful world which was surrounded by music. They began to communicate with others and share their feelings with the help of music. Music has become a kind of language since then.

Nowadays, people take a greater interest in music than ever before. More and more people begin to like music because they want to find their soul deep in their spirit and also because they have a need to share their life with other people. It is said that music has become an exactly international language today. It is even believed that if there are creatures on other planets and all other ways can't help communicate with them, music will probably do!

【小题1】The passage is intended to ___________.
A.show people how to enjoy music
B.persuade people to take interest in music
C.tell people the origin of music
D.present the reasons why the writer loves music
【小题2】The underlined word "this" in Paragraph 2 refers to“___________”.
A.the explanationB.his love of music
C.musicD.the history
【小题3】In Paragraph 2 the example of Adam is meant to ___________.
A.arouse people's curiosity
B.show music has a long history
C.reveal the real meaning of music
D.explain how music came into being
【小题4】Which of the following does NOT agree with the writer according to the passage?
A.Music can serve as a means of communication.
B.People can associate music with their own life.
C.Music helps to find the purpose of life.
D.Music is a universal language in a sense.

同类题2

   When students and parents are asked to rate subjects according to their importance, the arts are unavoidably at the bottom of the list. Music is nice, people seem to say, but not ________ Too often it is viewed as mere entertainment, but certainly not an _______ priority (最重要的事). This view is shortsighted._______ , music education is _______ and important to all students.

Music tells us who we are. Because music is an expression of human beings who _______ it, it reflects their thinking and values,_______ the social environment it came from. Rock music shows a _______ just as surely as does a Schubert song. The jazz influence that George Gershwin and other musicians introduced into their _______ is obviously American because it came from American musical traditions. Music expresses our character and _______ . It gives us identity as a society.

Music provides a kind of emotive perception (感知) that can ________ be shown in any other way. Science can just explain how the sun rises and sets. The arts,________ , explore emotive meaning of the same phenomenon. We need every possible way to discover and ________ to our world for one simple but powerful reason: No one way can get it all.

In exploration of the world, the arts are as ________ as mathematical and scientific symbols. They are ways we human beings “talk” to each other. They are the ________ of civilization through which we ________ our fears, our curiosity, our hunger, our discoveries and our hopes. The arts are ways we give form to our ideas and imagination so that they can be ________ with others. When we do not give children access (机会) to an important way of expressing themselves such as music,________ , they miss an effective way to express themselves.

Science and technology do not tell us what it ________ to be human. The arts do. Through music, we express and ________ human suffering, celebration, the meaning and value of peace and love.

So music education is far more necessary than people to ________.

【小题1】
A.creativeB.interestingC.importantD.unique
【小题2】
A.educationB.environmentC.economyD.emotion
【小题3】
A.After allB.In factC.For sureD.In general
【小题4】
A.boringB.disappointingC.necessaryD.amusing
【小题5】
A.believeB.enjoyC.createD.discover
【小题6】
A.as long asB.as well asC.as far asD.as much as
【小题7】
A.hobbyB.habitC.lifestyleD.custom
【小题8】
A.compositionsB.lifeC.habitsD.research
【小题9】
A.agesB.colorsC.interestsD.values
【小题10】
A.stillB.alsoC.alwaysD.hardly
【小题11】
A.anyhowB.howeverC.otherwiseD.therefore
【小题12】
A.applyB.leadC.reactD.get
【小题13】
A.simpleB.strangeC.difficultD.powerful
【小题14】
A.historyB.languageC.experimentD.result
【小题15】
A.expressB.avoidC.developD.hide
【小题16】
A.talkedB.livedC.sharedD.debated
【小题17】
A.in other wordsB.on one handC.above allD.as a result
【小题18】
A.buildsB.provesC.meansD.leaves
【小题19】
A.experienceB.desertC.escapeD.strengthen
【小题20】
A.appreciateB.realizeC.wishD.remember