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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After school, was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
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同类题1

   Cancer treatments left 5-year-old Isabella Harvey nearly bald (秃顶的). She felt _____ for not feeling as “beautiful” as her favourite Disney princesses, ______ a magical photo shoot lifted her _____ and moved many of her supporters to tears.

D’ Antoni, who is a member of Gianna Nicole’s Heart of Hope, a foundation that _____ cancer patients and their families, had known the Harvey family for years. She _____ to organize a photo shoot activity in a (n) _____ to cheer up Isabella. The photo shoot was held at the Oakes ide Bloomfield Cultural Center in Bloomfield, New Jersey. Dressed _____ a beautiful princess gown (女裙) , Isabella remained _____ about her bald head, and didn’t want to take off her hat. But all that changed when a famous performer Chelsea Knutson _____ as Cinderella, a Disney princess with a ______ head.

Isabella was excited to see Knutson in character. She took her hat off ______ and said, “ Wow, she looks just like me!” And in a moment she ______ from a shy little girl into a confident and brave princess!

“I didn’t ______ her in advance that Cinderella was going to be bald,” Pina Harvey, her mother said. “I wanted to ______ her. When Knutson came down the stairs as Cinderella, her face ______ She looked very cheerful.” D’ Antoni was equally ______. “When Isabella saw that Cinderella had no hair, she had a ______ from ear to ear. She knew that she wasn’t ______ ,” she said.

Isabella continues to fight cancer, going to the ______ every week. She hopes her fight can help ______ other kids to be brave and feel beautiful, too.

【小题1】
A.delightedB.surprisedC.discouragedD.exhausted
【小题2】
A.butB.soC.orD.if
【小题3】
A.standardsB.mannersC.conditionsD.spirits
【小题4】
A.curesB.receivesC.supportsD.handles
【小题5】
A.pretendedB.decidedC.agreedD.refused
【小题6】
A.honourB.effortC.hopeD.request
【小题7】
A.atB.inC.onD.over
【小题8】
A.confusedB.excitedC.calmD.embarrassed
【小题9】
A.functionedB.workedC.servedD.appeared
【小题10】
A.hairyB.roundC.baldD.clever
【小题11】
A.strangelyB.immediatelyC.personallyD.absolutely
【小题12】
A.changedB.movedC.crossedD.varied
【小题13】
A.tellB.demandC.announceD.cheat
【小题14】
A.annoyB.frightenC.amuseD.surprise
【小题15】
A.broke upB.turned upC.lit upD.went up
【小题16】
A.blamedB.respectedC.dislikedD.touched
【小题17】
A.smileB.choiceC.walkD.look
【小题18】
A.afraidB.unhealthyC.aloneD.famous
【小题19】
A.gardenB.hospitalC.schoolD.market
【小题20】
A.expectB.remindC.warnD.inspire

同类题2

   It is a familiar scene these days: employees taking newly laid-off co-workers out for a drink for comfort. But which side deserves more sympathy,the jobless or the still employed?On March 6,researchers at a conference at the University of Cambridge suggested it was the latter.

Brendan Burchell,a Cambridge sociologist,presented his analysis based on various surveys conducted across Europe. The data suggest that employed people who feel insecure in their jobs show similar levels of anxiety and depression as those who are unemployed. Although a newly jobless person's mental health may“bottom out”after about six months,and then may even begin to improve,the mental state of people who are continuously worried about losing their own job“just continues to get worse and worse”, Burchell says.

Psychologists support this theory by arguing that human beings feel more stressed during times of insecurity because they sense an immediate but invisible threat. Patients have been known to experience higher levels of anxiety, for example, while waiting for examination results than knowing what they are suffering from—even if the results are cancer. It's better to get the bad news and start doing something about it rather than wait with anxiety.  When the uncertainty continues, people stay in a nonstop“fight or flight”response, which leads to damaging stress.

But not every employee in insecure industries has such a discouraging view, Burchell says. In general, women get on better. While reporting higher levels of anxiety than men when directly questioned, women score lower in stress on the 12-item General Health Questionnaire, even when they have a job they feel insecure about losing.  As Burchell explains,“For women, most studies show that any job—it doesn't matter whether it is secure or insecure—gives psychological improvement over unemployment.”He supposes that the difference in men is that they tend to feel pressure not only to be employed, but also to be the primary breadwinners, and that more of a man's self-worth depends on his job.

【小题1】Why do researchers think the still employed deserve more sympathy?
A.They have to do more work since then.
B.They have no chance to find better jobs.
C.They have to work with inexperienced workers.
D.They constantly worry about losing their jobs.
【小题2】What is most likely to cause a“fight or flight”response?
A.Not having a paid job.
B.Poor job conditions.
C.Not knowing what will happen.
D.Pressure to work longer hours.
【小题3】What will the writer talk about following the last paragraph?
A.Advice on preparing for a job interview.
B.Advice on handling pressure from insecure industries.
C.Some knowledge of psychology.
D.Difference in men and women.
【小题4】What is the main idea of the passage?
A.Is it less stressful to get laid off than staying on?
B.Should more sympathy be given to the jobless?
C.Do employees bear more stress than ever before?
D.Do men or women show higher levels of anxiety?

同类题4

   Scott and his four companions were terribly disappointed. When they got to the South Pole, they found the Norwegians had_________them in the race to be the first ever to reach it. After_________ the British flag at the Pole, they took a photograph of themselves _______ they started the 950-mile journey back.

The journey was unexpectedly _________, and the joy and excitement about the Pole had gone out of them. The sun hardly _______. The snow storms always made it impossible to sight the stones they had _________ to mark their way home. To make things _________, Evans, whom they had all thought of _________the strongest of the five, fell badly into a deep hole in the ice. Having _________ along for several days, he suddenly fell down and died.

The four who were __________ pushed on at the best speed they could __________. Captain Oates had been suffering for some time from his __________feet; at night his feet swelled (肿胀) so large that he could __________ put his boots on the next morning, and he walked bravely although he was in great ________. He knew his slowness was making it less likely that __________ could save themselves. He asked them to leave him behind in his sleeping-bag, but they refused, and helped him __________ a few more miles, until it was time to put up the ________ for another night.

The following morning, __________ the other three were still in their sleeping-bags, he said, “I am just going outside and may be __________ some time.” He was never seen again. He had walked out __________ into the snow storm, hoping that his death would help his companions.

【小题1】
A.hitB.foughtC.wonD.beaten
【小题2】
A.growingB.puttingC.plantingD.laying
【小题3】
A.afterB.untilC.whileD.before
【小题4】
A.safeB.fastC.shortD.slow
【小题5】
A.roseB.setC.appearedD.disappeared
【小题6】
A.taken upB.cut upC.set upD.picked up
【小题7】
A.easierB.betterC.bitterD.worse
【小题8】
A.toB.uponC.asD.in
【小题9】
A.battledB.struggledC.speededD.waited
【小题10】
A.leftB.lostC.defeatedD.saved
【小题11】
A.manageB.tryC.employD.find
【小题12】
A.achedB.frozenC.hardenD.harmed
【小题13】
A.hardlyB.neverC.seldomD.nearly
【小题14】
A.painB.fearC.troubleD.danger
【小题15】
A.all othersB.some othersC.othersD.the others
【小题16】
A.awayB.withC.offD.on
【小题17】
A.bedB.tentC.blanketD.sleeping-bag
【小题18】
A.whileB.sinceC.forD.once
【小题19】
A.missedB.separatedC.passedD.gone
【小题20】
A.patientlyB.lonelyC.aloneD.worriedly