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读课文《美丽的西双版纳》,这一部分开头一句就作了修改:

[原文]五月份,正是谷子收获的时节,傣寨里的人家不管谁家有事,都是靠亲戚朋友来帮忙。

[课文]五月份,正是收获的季节。傣寨里的人家不管谁家有事,亲戚朋友都要来帮忙。你认为这样改好不好?请说明理由。

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改得好。“季节”比“时节”更准确;“收获”比“谷子收获”更顺当,更简洁;原文的“靠”不仅排除了主人自己在收获中的主导作用,而且也不能把亲友的热情帮忙的主动性表达出来,现在这样一改,既符合实际情况而且语言也更简洁了。

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    Nobody likes doing the dishes, but it turns out that doing this daily task might pay off in an unexpected way. According to a new study published in the Journal of Pediatrics, washing dishes by hand instead of using a dishwasher might prevent the development of allergies.

    Researchers in Sweden surveyed the parents of 1,029 children ages 7 and 8. They discovered that children whose families hand-washed the dishes instead of using a machine were less likely to have allergies.

    Earlier research has shown that dishes washed by machine are cleaner than those washed by hand. So why would kids who eat off slightly dirtier plates be better off when we talk about preventing allergies? One explanation is based on a theory known as the "hygiene hypothesis (卫生假说)," which says the reason why kids develop allergies is that their surroundings are actually too clean.

    Your immune (免疫) system keeps you healthy by fighting germs (病菌) like bacteria and viruses. But when you have allergies, it overreacts and tries to fight ordinary things like pollen (花粉) or certain foods.

    Being exposed to germs, particularly early in life, is good training for the immune system, says the lead author of the study, Dr. Bill Hesselmar of Queen Silvia Hospital in Sweden. "You excite the immune system in various ways and it becomes tolerant."

    This study shows that while using the dishwasher might be easier, the old-fashioned method of cleaning up could be better for your health.