曾巩，字子固，建昌南丰人。生而警敏，读书数百言，脱口辄诵。年十二，试作《六论》，援笔而成，辞甚伟。甫冠，名闻四方。欧阳修见其文，奇之。中嘉祐二年进士第。出通判越州，岁饥，度常平①不足赡，而田野之民，不能皆至城邑。谕告属县，讽富人自实粟，总十五万石，视常平价稍增以予民。民得从便受粟，不出田里，而食有余。又贷之种粮，使随秋赋以偿，农事不乏。

    知齐州，其治以疾奸急盗为本。曲堤周氏子高横纵，贼良民，力能动权豪，州县吏莫敢诘，巩取置于法。章邱民聚党村落间，号“霸王社”，椎剽夺囚，无不如志。巩配三十一人，又属民为保伍，使几察其出入，有盗则鸣鼓相援，每发辄得盗。有葛友者，自出首。巩饮食冠裳之，假以骑从，辇所购金帛随之，夸徇四境。盗闻，多出自首。自是外户不闭。

    河北发民浚河，调及它路，齐当给夫二万。县初按籍三丁出夫一，巩括其隐漏，至于九而取一，省费数倍。知洪州。会江西岁大疫，巩命县镇亭传，悉储药待求，军民不能自养者，来食息官舍，资其食饮衣衾之具，分医视诊。师征安南，所过州为万人备。他吏暴诛亟敛，民不堪。巩先期区处猝集，师去，市里不知。加直龙图阁、知福州。南剑将乐盗廖恩既赦罪出降，余众溃复合，阴相结附，旁连数州，尤桀者呼之不至，居人慑恐。巩以计罗致之，继自归者二百辈。福多佛寺，僧利其富饶，争欲为主守，赇请公行。巩俾其徒相推择，识诸籍，以次补之。授帖于府庭，却其私谢，以绝左右徼求之弊。福州无职田，岁鬻园蔬收其直，自入常三四十万。巩曰：“太守与民争利，可乎？”罢之。后至者亦不复取也。徙明、亳、沧三州。巩负才名久外徙世颇谓偃蹇不偶一时后生辈锋出巩视之泊如也拜中书舍人。甫数月，丁母艰去。又数月而卒，年六十五。巩为文章，上下驰骋，愈出而愈工，本原“六经”，斟酌于司马迁、韩愈，一时工作文词者，鲜能过也。

（节选自《宋史·曾巩传》）

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    Yang Hui was born in Longyan, Fujian. She grew up in a small village. She lost all her fingers and feet when she was three. She was badly burnt by accident when she went out with her grandparents. She couldn't walk and she seldom went out.

    The young girl had to learn to do everything. At first she wasn't able to use chopsticks. Her parents had to teach her for a long time. Thanks to her strong will（意志）to do everything by herself, she overcame those difficult times. Now she can look after herself. She also loves studying and she has finished the junior high school courses.

    About five years ago, Yang Hui saw someone make cross-stitch（十字绣）and she decided to learn to make it herself. As you can imagine, it's very difficult to make it without fingers. Yang Hui failed so many times. But she never gave up. And through many hours of practice, now she can use her arms to make good cross-stitch works and she is faster than other people. "One had to put great efforts into what she was doing." Yang Hui said.

    Now she is 21 years old and she is in hospital in Fujian. She continues making a 1.83-meter-long cross-stitch work with arms. She has no enough money for her operations（手术）. Many kind-hearted people come to visit her and call on people to raise money for her.

    As for her future, Yang Hui said, "I hope to stand up and walk one day after operations. I want to make more money by selling cross-stitch works."

    If you want to know more about Yang Hui and help her, please call 13004982348.

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    我说道：“爸爸，你走吧。”

    他往车外看了看说：“我买几个橘子去。你就在此地，不要走动。”

    我看那边月台的栅栏外有几个卖东西的等着顾客。

    走到那边月台，须穿过铁道，须跳下去又爬上去。

    父亲是一个胖子，走过去自然要费事些。

    我本来要去的，他不肯，只好让他去。

    我看见他戴着黑布小帽，穿着黑布大马褂，深青布棉袍，蹒跚地走到铁道边，慢慢地探身下去，尚不大难。

    可是他穿过铁道，要爬上月台，就不容易了。

    他用两手攀着上面，两脚再向上缩；他肥胖的身子向左微倾，显出努力的样子，这时我看见他的背影，我的泪很快地流下来了。

    我赶紧拭干了泪。

    怕他看见，也怕别人看见。

    我再向外看时，他己抱了朱红的橘子往回走了。

    过铁道时，他先将橘子放在地上，自己慢慢爬下，再抱起橘子走。

    到这边时，我赶紧去搀他。

    他和我走到车上，将橘子一股脑儿放在我的皮大衣上。

    于是扑扑身上的泥土，心里很轻松似的。

    过一会说：“我走了，到那边来信！”

    我望着他走出去。

    他走了几步，回头看见我，说：“进去吧，里面没人。”

    等他的背影混入来来往往的人里，再找不着了，我便进去坐下，我的泪又来了。