我的父亲是位医生,工作勤恳,经常早出晚归,他不仅对自己而且对工作严格要求,他总是为病人着想,为病人减轻痛苦。他决心把自己的一生都献给医学事业。喜欢读书,爱好音乐。
适当增加细节,使行文连贯。词数100左右。
(参考词汇:解除痛苦:relief/reduce pain 取得巨大成就:achieve great success医学事业:medical career
My father
My father is forty-three years old. He is a tall man with a pair of glasses. He is a doctor who works very hard. He goes out early and comes back at dusk/late. He is not only strict with himself, but also responsible for his work. He spares n