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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A large number of students from all over the country studies in our beautiful new school.There has a big library in our school.We can take out all the different kind of books we like to read.I often borrowed novels from a library.There is also a beautiful garden in their school.I like to do most is enjoy the great view of it.Many kinds of flowers of different colors bloom in it,so lots of butterflies come or fly around them.Our classroom is next to in the garden.Have classes in such a beautiful environment,we feel very happy.

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【小题1】我第一次在外国人面前说英语时,我还是一个高中生。(the first time)
_____________________, I was a student of senior high school.
【小题2】她最大的愿望是当一名中学的英语老师。(不定式作表语)
Her greatest wish is ____________________________
【小题3】上个月,她在圆满完成任务中发挥了重要作用。 (play a… role in)
Last month, ________________________________finishing the task successfully.
【小题4】这个周末去公园野餐怎么样?(What about…)
______________________ for a picnic this weekend?
【小题5】下届奥运会谁将代表我国出任开幕式的旗手尚不得而知。(represent)
It hasn’t been known that ___________________________________ in the next Olympic Games as a flag bearer in the opening ceremony.
【小题6】换句话说,你还有别的什么可担忧的?(in other words)
__________________, what else are you still ___________?
【小题7】我爱吃糖果,但是妈妈不允许我太经常吃。(let)
I love sweets but Mum____________________________.
【小题8】上周我成功地为朋友组织了一场生日聚会,我感到很开心。(时态)
I am very happy that I ______________________ for my friend last week.
【小题9】如果我知道他的电话号码,我就会告诉你。(虚拟语气)
If I knew his telephone number, __________________________.
【小题10】他一到那儿,就会第一时间打电话给我。(as soon as…)
___________he will phone me first.

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Freedom and Responsibility
Freedom’s challenge in the Digital Age is a serious topic. We are facing today a strange new world and we are all wondering what we are going to do with it.
Some 2,500 years ago Greece discovered freedom. Before that there was no freedom. There were great civilizations, splendid empires, but no freedom anywhere. Egypt and Babylon were both tyrannies ,  one very powerful man ruling over helpless masses.
In Greece, in Athens (雅典), a little city in a little country, there were no helpless masses. And Athenians willingly obeyed the written laws which they themselves passed, and the unwritten, which must be obeyed if free men live together. They must show each other kindness and pity and the many qualities without which life would be very painful unless one chose to live alone in the desert.The Athenians never thought that a man was free if he could do what he wanted. A man was free if he was self-controlled. To make yourself obey what you approved was freedom. They were saved from looking at their lives as their own private affair. Each one felt responsible for the welfare of Athens, not because it was forced on him from the outside, but because the city was his pride and his safety. The essential belief of the first free government in the world was liberty for all men who could control themselves and would take responsibility for the state.
But discovering freedom is not like discovering computers. It cannot be discovered once for all. If people do not prize it, and work for it, it will go. Constant watch is its price. Athens changed. It was a change that took place without being noticed though it was of the extreme importance, a spiritual change which affected the whole state. It had been the Athenian’ s pride and joy to give to their city. That they could get material benefits from her never entered their minds. There had to be a complete change of attitude before they could look at the city as an employer who paid her citizens for doing her work. Now instead of men giving to the state, the state was to give to them. What the people wanted was a government which would provide a comfortable life for them; and with this as the primary object, ideas of freedom and self-reliance and responsibility were neglected to the point of disappearing. Athens was more and more looked on as a cooperative business possessed of great wealth in which all citizens had a right to share.
Athens reached the point when the freedom she really wanted was freedom from responsibility. There could be only one result. If men insisted on being free from the burden of self-dependence and responsibility for the common good, they would cease to be free. Responsibility is the price every man must pay for freedom. It is to be had on no other terms. Athens, the Athens of Ancient Greece, refused responsibility; she reached the end of freedom and was never to have it again. But, “the excellent becomes the permanent”, Aristotle said. Athens lost freedom forever, but freedom was not lost forever for the world. A great American, James Madison, referred to: “The capacity (能力) of mankind for self-government.” No doubt he had not an idea that he was speaking Greek. Athens was not in the farthest background of his mind, but once man has a great and good idea, it is never completely lost. The Digital Age cannot destroy it. Somehow in this or that man’s thought such an idea lives though unconsidered by the world of action. One can never be sure that it is not on the point of breaking out into action only sure that it will do so sometime.
【小题1】What does the underlined word “tyrannies” in Paragraph 2 refer to?
A.Countries where their people need help.
B.Powerful states with higher civilization.
C.Splendid empires where people enjoy freedom.
D.Governments ruled with absolute power.
【小题2】People believing in freedom are those who________ .
A.regard their life as their own business
B.seek gains as their primary object
C.behave within the laws and value systems
D.treat others with kindness and pity
【小题3】What change in attitude took place in Athens?
A.The Athenians refused to take their responsibility.
B.The Athenians no longer took pride in the city.
C.The Athenians benefited spiritually from the government.
D.The Athenians looked on the government as a business.
【小题4】What does the sentence “There could be only one result.” in Paragraph 5 mean?
A.Athens would continue to be free.
B.Athens would cease to have freedom.
C.Freedom would come from responsibility.
D.Freedom would stop Athens from self-dependence.
【小题5】Why does the author refer to Aristotle and Madison?
A.The author is hopeful about freedom.
B.The author is cautious about self-government.
C.The author is skeptical of Greek civilization.
D.The author is proud of man’s capacity.
【小题6】What is the author’s understanding of freedom?
A.Freedom can be more popular in the digital age.
B.Freedom may come to an end in the digital age.
C.Freedom should have priority over responsibility.
D.Freedom needs to be guaranteed by responsibility.

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It was a bright spring afternoon when Freda told me she wouldn’t need me any more. I had just finished my four-hour work_______up and down the stairs of her three-storey home, cleaning the floor and washing the dishes. She was_______jeans and a sweater, sitting at the table I had just_______A pile of papers spread around her. Her husband’s_______was going to be reduced by thirty percent. And they were trying to live as if it had_______happened. I felt sorry for her, but I also felt a sense of_______
I had been cleaning Freda’s house for five years and had_______an unexpected relationship with the family. It was not just_______I had become an expert at scraping(刮掉) dirt stuck to their wooden floor,_______that I had learned exactly how to place toys on the girls’ beds. It was________than that, for I felt I had become a part of their________
Freda stayed at home with the kids,________I would often see her in the morning________them to school. And I’d be there when they________home at lunch for sandwiches and piano practice. I had________them grow up. Now I was fired, but the________thing was that I still wanted to keep scraping away the dirt and dust for the family.
I left Freda’s house that day, wondering about the________of my relationship with my clients(主顾). Who am I________them? As a matter of fact, I’m________an employee—the lowest kind of employee. But I’m also a trusted________of the family. I can’t help worrying about what happens around me.
【小题1】
A.steppingB.comingC.jumpingD.moving
【小题2】
A.hangingB.makingC.wearingD.changing
【小题3】
A.cleanedB.washedC.sweptD.brushed
【小题4】
A.dutyB.moneyC.workD.pay
【小题5】
A.alreadyB.seldomC.neverD.yet
【小题6】
A.regretB.surpriseC.fearD.loss
【小题7】
A.startedB.developedC.improvedD.broken
【小题8】
A.whyB.whatC.thatD.which
【小题9】
A.butB.andC.orD.for
【小题10】
A.lessB.leastC.moreD.most
【小题11】
A.lifeB.storyC.activityD.experience
【小题12】
A.asB.soC.sinceD.however
【小题13】
A.takingB.bringingC.meetingD.calling
【小题14】
A.leftB.returnedC.wentD.marched
【小题15】
A.foundB.noticedC.watchedD.realized
【小题16】
A.possibleB.greatC.properD.strange
【小题17】
A.meaningB.natureC.resultD.importance
【小题18】
A.forB.toC.withD.at
【小题19】
A.hardlyB.certainlyC.probablyD.merely
【小题20】
A.memberB.personC.relativeD.companion