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Last week, my schoolmates and teachers were organized to climb the East Mountain located 20 kilometers away from their school. As soon as we arrive at the foot of the mountain, we set about climb with great passion. On our way up, we had so much difficult walking along the steep hill that we were tiring out. But with the teachers 'help, we managed to reach for the top of the mountain that we were greeted by the bright sunshine and beautiful view. Seeing from the top, the city looked like a huge garden. This mountain climbing activity turned out to be great success. Not only did we take a break from our heavy school work, and we also had a chance to get close to nature.

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What a wonderful day for skating !My friends and I went skating on yesterday.When we arrived  we found a lot of people were  already here.My friend was very poor at skating but  was afraid of skating alone .He held onto my arm and walks slowly and carefully, whenever someone passed by his body rocked violent as if he was about fall . I took hold of him many times so as he wouldn’t  fall .He kept trying and gradually  should skate alone . Then we skated together freely,laugh with joy and excitement .We felt so great!

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Dear Manager,

I am a exchange student from China. Yesterday, I go to your cinema to see a film. Although the film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because of the following problem in the cinema.

First, the film was delaying because there were a lot of advertisements in the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. In addition, the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, that made it difficult for me to find the way out.

As far as I am concerned, I'm disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I hope that you can take these problems in consideration and take some measures to solve them.

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When I was in high school, most of my friends had bicycle. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money, and he said he could only give me half of the money. I should earn the other half by myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month late. He gave me the other fifty. You can imagine how happily I felt when I ride to school on my own bicycle.