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It is known to all that we today's students fix our attentions on our lessons, so we know little of society. A holiday was the best time and the best chance to make up that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we have learned in books or in class can't have the same important effect on us as which we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make a progress in both knowledge and practical abilities. However, when we take a part-time job, we may get paying more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in our holidays, if it's possibly.

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Last week, my schoolmates and teachers were organized to climb the East Mountain located 20 kilometers away from their school. As soon as we arrive at the foot of the mountain, we set about climb with great passion. On our way up, we had so much difficult walking along the steep hill that we were tiring out. But with the teachers 'help, we managed to reach for the top of the mountain that we were greeted by the bright sunshine and beautiful view. Seeing from the top, the city looked like a huge garden. This mountain climbing activity turned out to be great success. Not only did we take a break from our heavy school work, and we also had a chance to get close to nature.

   This is new to me and I don’t know what I will say really so I’m just giving it a try. I was always a runner and in pretty good shape for most of my life. Then I hit a bad patch and each day just couldn’t get myself out there to run. I put on weight, which just made me feel worse about myself.

I finally got the running back again after a few years but it was much harder than it used to be and I struggled to get through even the shortest, slowest jog.

I was out in a run the other day and I had almost convinced (说服) myself to give up when I heard someone say, “You can do it! It’s hard, but you can do it!” There was a lady walking the other way and had the biggest smile on her face.

Those words of encouragement at a time when I was ready to give up were like a perfect intervention (干预). I finished my run and now every time I feel like quitting I will hear her words in my head and they give me motivation (动力) and encouragement.

I’ve never seen her again so I’ve never been able to thank her and let her know the effect something as simple as a few words of encouragement from a stranger had and still has on me. It always encourages me in my life and has great influence on my life. I will never forget it and place it in my heart. I will tell it to others and make others believe encouragement is very important to us.

【小题1】What was the author like before putting on weight?

A．He was very tall.	B．He was in good shape.
C．He was very thin.	D．He was in poor health.

【小题2】What does the underlined sentence mean in the first paragraph?

A．The author had trouble in life.	B．The author’s clothes were worn out.
C．The author was very lucky.	D．The author was in good spirits.

【小题3】What made the author not give up running?

A．His own hard work.	B．A strange lady’s encouraging words.
C．His friends’ encouragement.	D．His parents’ encouragement.

【小题4】What’s the main idea of the passage?

A．An exciting experience.	B．A story about losing weight.
C．Kind words from a stranger.	D．The importance of determination.

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What a wonderful day for skating !My friends and I went skating on yesterday.When we arrived  we found a lot of people were  already here.My friend was very poor at skating but  was afraid of skating alone .He held onto my arm and walks slowly and carefully, whenever someone passed by his body rocked violent as if he was about fall . I took hold of him many times so as he wouldn’t  fall .He kept trying and gradually  should skate alone . Then we skated together freely,laugh with joy and excitement .We felt so great!