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I came to the North America when I was 14 year old. Immediately upon my arrive I was put into an English class to learn to speak English. In Korea, we lived close to a US base. However, as a child, I grew up thinking there was only two types of people, black soldiers and white soldiers, and that they all spoke English. So you can imagine my determination to speak English. When I settled Los Angeles and went to school, I work really hard. I would talk with his friends outside of class, or study hard in class. I noticed my English improved so faster!

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Dear Mr. Smith，

I've read your advertisement for the assistant teacher for a children's winter camp. I am quite interesting in this position. Most importantly, I love working with children! As the monitor in your class, in the past two years I proved myself to be an excellent helper to my teachers. I speak fluent English, what enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effective with students in an English-only environment.

I will soon have a three-week winter vacations, so I have no problem working evenings and weekends. I would be pleased to assist for both the teachers and students in this challenging or rewarding environment.

Looking forward to receive your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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Dear Mr. Smith，

I have learnt the announcement that the summer camp would be held in Singapore in the Internet. I am interesting in it.

I have a good command（掌握）of English，which enable me to communicate with friends from other part of the world without difficulty. Therefore，having a rich knowledge of Chinese culture，I will make more people to know our splendid culture. More importantly，I have strong belief that I will broaden my mind by learning about their cultures.

I’d appreciate it whether I could be accepted and I will value the chance to improve yourself. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

假定你是Peter。你的笔友Lazy Bone给你发了一封邮件，向你求助。请根据写作要点和要求给Lazy Bone回一封邮件。

From: Lazybone@163.com

To: Peter@domain.com

Subject: Ask for advice

Dear Peter, As you know, I am a little fat, so I am considering losing weight. I have worked out an workout plan, but I can’t go on with my plan! How can I motivate (激励) myself to stick to the exercise schedule? I need your valuable advice! Best regards! Yours, Lazy Bone

 
写作要点：
1．列举不能坚持锻炼的常见借口(如太忙等)；
2．谈谈坚持锻炼的好处(如提高学习效率等)；
3．提出坚持锻炼的建议。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．文章的开头和结尾巳给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：效率efficiency 监督supervise
Dear Lazy Bone,

I used to have the same problem! _____________________________________________________________

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Wish you success!

Yours,

Peter

第24届冬奥会将在北京举行。目前，冬奥会组委会正在全国范围内选拔奧运会火炬手。请你以李华为名，按照所给表格的内容，给组委会办公室的张先生写一封信，申请报名参加。

个人情况	17岁，男，高二学生
健康状况	身体健康
爱好	热爱体育运动，曾得过学校男子一万米长跑的冠军
个性	工作认真负责，乐于奉献，具有团队合作精神，容易与他人相处
态度	……
其他	……

 
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．必须包含所有要点，但不要逐字翻译；
3．文章的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：火炬手torch bearer 冬奥会the Winter Olympic Games
Dear Mr. Zhang,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing this letter ______________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua