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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
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同类题1

   Living near the ocean is good for health, but not a luxury all can afford. But those who can, certainly gain a lot of health benefits over common inland folks.

【小题1】 As we know, because people living near a coast get enough time to swim in the seawater, they naturally tend to be stronger. Physicians have been recommending visits to coasts that specialize in providing seawater cleansing treatment, which improves the immune system.

● Living near the ocean promotes physical activity. The seashore encourages outdoor activities like jogging on the sand, beach volleyball, scuba-diving, surfing, etc .【小题2】

● Fresh air helps get sleep. Fresh ocean air is composed of negatively charged ions that enable us to consume oxygen, adding to good health. These ions also aid in balancing the serotonin (血清素) level, which helps in feeling more relaxed. 【小题3】 Little by little, this leads to better sleep after spending a large amount of time near the ocean.

● Living near the ocean can help you absorb more vitamin

A.
【小题4】 Thus, natural sunlight, along with the sunrays which bounce back from the sand and the ocean, is an excellent supply for our everyday need for vitamin
A.

● Living near the ocean is helpful in meditation (冥想).

【小题5】 It helps the mind jolt (摇动) free from all worries of the past or the future. We get totally tuned into the present, and become calm, as we listen to the gradual rise and fall of the waves.
A.People living near a coast are healthier.
B.Sunshine is a major source of vitamin D.
C.How will living near the ocean help improve your health?
D. Just sit near the seashore and observe the waves moving back and forth.
D.This serves in leading an active lifestyle for people living near or on beaches.
E.Vitamin D helps you absorb calcium, maintaining a normal immune system.
F.Besides, when you listen to the sound of waves, it relaxes the mind to a very calm state.

同类题3

   Chances are the first Monday in September is a day off from school for you. If it is, you can _______ a man named Peter McGuire. Who's Peter McGuire?According to_______  , he's the founding father of Labor Day. On September5, 1882, McGuire led a_______ of 10, 000 workers in New York City一workers who took the day off from their jobs to hold a parade(游行) and a picnic. The_______ came to be known as Labor Day,and the idea_______ throughout the country. In 1887,Oregon became the first state to make it a statewide holiday, on the first Saturday in June. And in 1894,President Grover Cleveland_______ a bill that made . Labor Day a(n)_______ holiday, on the first Monday in September一the date we still celebrate to this day.

Labor Day began as a day for workers to protest, (抗议)_______ poor working conditions一long days, low pay and a lack of job security. Back in Peter McGuire's day, you could be_______ just for calling in sick -________  you were really too sick to work. Twelve-hour workdays were also________  . And workers had only short breaks for meals and other necessities.

McGuire went to work at the age of eleven, ________ newspapers on the streets of New York City. He had to help________ his family. McGuire saw poor working conditions first-hand. And he________ those conditions himself. That urged him to help________ the first trade unions in the United States.

The workers hoped strength in numbers would________ their employers to improve working conditions. They weren't always ________ . But' thanks to their________ the eight-hour workday and the five-day workweek became common practices. So did________ vacations and sick days. As for Labor Day itself, it became a day________  labor for most workers. So thanks to Peter McGuire, Labor Day means a day off from school for you and your teachers.

【小题1】
A.requestB.seekC.rememberD.thank
【小题2】
A.historiansB.governmentsC.teachersD.players
【小题3】
A.fightingB.ceremonyC.gatheringD.decision
【小题4】
A.journeyB.celebrationC.taskD.congratulation
【小题5】
A.attackedB.educatedC.explodedD.spread
【小题6】
A.signedB.acceptedC.broughtD.hosted
【小题7】
A.informalB.localC.nationalD.personal
【小题8】
A.withB.againstC.forD.behind
【小题9】
A.hiredB.invitedC.ignoredD.fired
【小题10】
A.now thatB.even ifC.as long asD.so that
【小题11】
A.impossibleB.secureC.commonD.free
【小题12】
A.sellingB.readingC.makingD.buying
【小题13】
A.prepareB.donateC.supportD.inspire
【小题14】
A.introducedB.experiencedC.imaginedD.survived
【小题15】
A.remainB.createC.provideD.organize
【小题16】
A.allowB.begC.convinceD.force
【小题17】
A.satisfiedB.successfulC.curiousD.helpful
【小题18】
A.effortB.memoryC.labourD.condition
【小题19】
A.boringB.paidC.reducedD.former
【小题20】
A.made ofB.full ofC.busy withD.free from

同类题4

   I was surprised when I received a short message from my father wishing me a happy birthday.

I had _____ to hear from my mother,my grandmother and my other relatives,but never from my father. Lying in bed,_____ of my father flooded back.

When I was a little boy,I regarded my father as a(n)_____  able to do anything. _____ ,things slowly began to _____ .The more I learned,the more I doubted what he said. The gap between us _____ and,at last,I didn't even like communicating with him.

My father,in my mind,had no _____ in talking with me. Dinner was the only time we were together. He had no time to watch TV with me. He would tell me to ask my mother _____ I needed something. He even refused to answer my _____ when I phoned from school. I got ______ the changes. I thought that perhaps my father no longer ______ me.

Over time, however, I began to wonder whether my ______ was right. One day, my mother told me that each time I called, my father was always ______ beside her. Suddenly, I hated myself for my ______ behavior toward him.

I planned thousands of times to ______ to my father. In the end, however, I was always too embarrassed about what I had done.

But that Saturday, I was so ______ by his short message. I ______ then that my father's love for me had never disappeared. I decided to send a ______ “Thank you, my dear father.”

Two days later, when I returned home, my mother told me that my father had been so ______ when he received my reply. She said he had ______ from morning till night. At that moment, I felt truly happy.

【小题1】
A.expectedB.intendedC.plannedD.wanted
【小题2】
A.opinionsB.memoriesC.remarksD.responses
【小题3】
A.instructorB.teacherC.heroD.friend
【小题4】
A.HoweverB.OtherwiseC.ThereforeD.Besides
【小题5】
A.improveB.changeC.developD.appear
【小题6】
A.disappearedB.declinedC.remainedD.grew
【小题7】
A.interestB.effortC.chanceD.courage
【小题8】
A.becauseB.ifC.whyD.unless
【小题9】
A.lettersB.e-mailsC.questionsD.calls
【小题10】
A.fond ofB.ashamed ofC.familiar withD.accustomed to
【小题11】
A.helpedB.supportedC.lovedD.missed
【小题12】
A.behaviorB.attitudeC.mannerD.idea
【小题13】
A.complainingB.listeningC.objectingD.bothering
【小题14】
A.casualB.reasonableC.coldD.compulsory
【小题15】
A.apologizeB.writeC.explainD.agree
【小题16】
A.surprisedB.confusedC.touchedD.pleased
【小题17】
A.imaginedB.wonderedC.realizedD.relieved
【小题18】
A.wishB.cardC.giftD.reply
【小题19】
A.upsetB.happyC.satisfiedD.nervous
【小题20】
A.waitedB.sighedC.hesitatedD.smiled

同类题5

   I was at the post office early that morning, hoping to be in and out in a short while. Yet, I _____ myself standing in a queue that went all the way into the hallway. I had never seen so many people there on a weekday. It seemed someone might have made an announcement, _____ customers to carry as many packages as they could and bring them in when I needed to have my own package _____. The queue moved very slowly. My patience ran out and I got _____. The longer it took, the angrier I became. When I got to the counter finally, I finished my _____ quickly and briefly, and then walked past the queue that was then extending past the front door.

“Excuse me,” I said, trying not to be too pushy. Several people had to move _____ to make room for me to get to the _____.

I stepped out, complaining about the _____ conditions. Thinking I was going to be late for my dentist appointment, I headed into the parking lot.

A woman was coming across the parking lot in my direction. She was walking with determination, and each step sounded very heavy. I _____ that she looked as if she breathed fire. It stopped me in my tracks. I ______ myself and it wasn’t pretty. Had I looked like that? Her body language said that she was having a ______ day. My anger melted away. I wished I could wrap her in a hug but I was a ______. So I did what I could in a minute ______ she hurried past me — I smiled. In a second everything changed. She was astonished, then somewhat ______. Then her face softened and her shoulders ______. I saw her take a deep breath. Her pace slowed and she ______ back at me as we passed each other.

I continued to smile all the way to my ______. Wow, it’s amazing what a simple smile can do.

From then on, I became aware of people’s ______ and my own, the way we show our feelings. Now I use that ______ every day to make me ______ that when facing the world, I can try a smile.

【小题1】
A.foundB.helpedC.troubledD.enjoyed
【小题2】
A.orderingB.welcomingC.suggestingD.begging
【小题3】
A.liftedB.cashedC.weighedD.carried
【小题4】
A.pleasedB.disappointedC.surprisedD.annoyed
【小题5】
A.businessB.choiceC.explanationD.preparation
【小题6】
A.awayB.aboutC.alongD.aside
【小题7】
A.counterB.cashierC.exitD.entrance
【小题8】
A.weatherB.serviceC.workD.shopping
【小题9】
A.announcedB.preferredC.provedD.noticed
【小题10】
A.trustedB.rethoughtC.hidD.persuaded
【小题11】
A.badB.brightC.bigD.nice
【小题12】
A.gentlemanB.strangerC.customerD.passenger
【小题13】
A.untilB.thoughC.beforeD.since
【小题14】
A.attractedB.frightenedC.excitedD.confused
【小题15】
A.trembledB.raisedC.relaxedD.tightened
【小题16】
A.criedB.shoutedC.smiledD.laughed
【小题17】
A.carB.officeC.homeD.queue
【小题18】
A.appearancesB.reactionsC.behaviorsD.expressions
【小题19】
A.treatmentB.awarenessC.conclusionD.achievement
【小题20】
A.rememberB.defendC.controlD.tolerate