短文改错

When I was at school, I have a nice classmate named Jenny , which was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good at three language ,although she was very young. It was interested that her father was a French while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy about collect stamps ,listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be an engineer, so she usually studied hard achieve it. She often told fun stories with English to make us laugh. And it was clear that we all liked her short after that.

短文改错
Dear Mr. Li,

I’m Wang Tao. I’m writing to tell you my opinion about employ a foreign language teacher.

There are two factor to think over. For one thing, the sense of a humor is necessary for a teacher, who can make the class interesting and lively. For another, the teacher’s ability speak Chinese matters much. Because with the help of Chinese he and students can communicate with each other smooth.

Various of after-school activities, such as the English Evening and English Corner, should be organizing by the foreign language teacher. This would bring the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.

Yours,

Wang Tao

假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Nancy的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助。请根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求回帖。

Nancy Post at3-11-2018 21：08 1#

Hi, everyone, I'm a 15-year-old girl and some boys often call me names in school. I get so angry that I often cry in secret. I'm not the type of person who likes to talk to people about these things. What should I do？

←Last Topic →Next Topic +REPLY   +NEW

 
写作要点：
1. 分析男生辱骂Nancy的原因；
2. 给Nancy 提出解决问题的具体建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：有男子汉气概的manly不予理睬 ignore +
Hi, Nancy,

I'm very sorry to hear what is happening to you_________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

短文改错
Last week, a survey was being done in our school by the students' union. As the result shows, some students have breakfast regularly. Therefore, the others don't, or even skip it. Between the students who have breakfast every day, only a few have a balanced diet which include bread, milk and eggs. There are several reasons in my opinion. First of all, many students don't know the important of breakfast. Besides, many parents have limited knowledge about which a balanced diet is. Finally, teachers give students too much tasks, so they have no time have breakfast. In the word, every student should have breakfast regularly. The more balanced diet one has, the healthy he will be!