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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very cold on last Monday morning. I was walking on my way to school when I notice two street cleaners cleaning the street in the cold wind. Saw them working so hard on such a cold morning, I was deeply touching and made up my mind to do something for them.
After arriving at school, our classmates gathered together to discuss when we could do help the street cleaners. Some classmate suggested helping with the cleaning. Some suggested bringing any warm clothes to them while others advised getting some hot food to keep us warm. Finally we both agreed on helping with the cleaning and bringing some hot food to them.
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同类题2

Volunteering and its Surprising Benefits

In today's busy society, it can be hard to think about finding time to volunteer. _____ , the benefits of volunteering are enormous(巨大的), both to you and to the community. The right match can help you find friends, reach out to the community, learn new skills and even _____ your career. Volunteering can even help protect your mental and physical health.

One of the better-known benefits of volunteering is the ____ on the community. Unpaid volunteers are often the glue(胶水) that holds a community together. Volunteering allows you to ____ your community and make it a better place.

One of the best ______ to make new friends and strengthen existing relationships is to _____ to a shared activity together. Volunteering is a great way to meet new people, _____ if you are  new to an area. Volunteering also strengthens your ____ to the community and broadens your support network, ___ you to people with common interests, neighbourhood resources, and fun and fulfilling activities.

 ___ some people are naturally outgoing,others are _____ and have a hard time meeting new people. Volunteering gives you the _____ to practise and develop your social skills, since you are meeting regularly with a group of people with _____ interests. Once you have motivation, it's easier to branch out and  make more friends and contacts.

Volunteering can provide a healthy boost (激励)to your self-confidence, self-esteem and life satisfaction. You are doing good for others and the community , which ______ a natural sense of accomplishment. Your ____ as a volunteer can also give you a sense of pride and identity. And the better you feel about yourself, the more ______ you are to have a positive view of your life and future goals.

 _____ the risk of depression is another important benefit of volunteering. A key ____ in depression is social isolation(孤立). Volunteering _____ you in regular contact with others and helps you develop a solid support system, which ______ protects you against stress and depression when you' re going through challenging times.

【小题1】
A.FurthermoreB.HoweverC.MeanwhileD.Therefore
【小题2】
A.formB.affectC.changeD.advance
【小题3】
A.impactB.emphasisC.developmentD.comment
【小题4】
A.agree withB.benefit fromC.connect toD.join in
【小题5】
A.applicationB.goalsC.waysD.attitude
【小题6】
A.commitB.belongC.agreeD.relate
【小题7】
A.typicallyB.possiblyC.especiallyD.essentially
【小题8】
A.reactionsB.tiesC.contributionsD.attachments
【小题9】
A.referringB.associatingC.accompanyingD.exposing
【小题10】
A.WhileB.SinceC.IfD.As
【小题11】
A.modestB.shyC.easy-goingD.proud
【小题12】
A.opportunityB.occasionC.challengeD.condition
【小题13】
A.specialB.commonC.strangeD.rare
【小题14】
A.acquiresB.servesC.remindsD.provides
【小题15】
A.roleB.actionC.performanceD.responsibility
【小题16】
A.capableB.availableC.convenientD.likely
【小题17】
A.TakingB.ReducingC.DevelopingD.Facing
【小题18】
A.conceptB.phenomenonC.factorD.meaning
【小题19】
A.educatesB.leadsC.keepsD.informs
【小题20】
A.in additionB.in turnC.in vainD.in response

同类题3

   Andrew Carnegie once said,"No man can become rich without himself enriching others. The man who dies rich dies disgraced." Many successful businessmen think about sharing and giving back to their community at some point in their lives,and take part in philanthropy(慈善行为).Some say it is out of generosity,and others believe that it is for tax reasons. One way or another,the money spent for charitable purposes is needed and has some type of impact on someone's life. The following businessmen believe that sharing is caring. They have donated(捐赠)a combined amount of $ 106.8 billion according to research firm Wealth-X.

German Dietmar Hopp co-founded SAP AG,the famous software company. Through his foundation called Dietmar-Hopp-Stiftung,he donated a total of $1 billion to support local education,sports,and health causes in his hometown in Germany. He is worth $ 6.3 billion.

Pierre Omidyar,the French-born Iranian- American businessman is the founder of eBay. In 1998,he started the Omidyar Foundation with his wife. The organization donates to several areas,food,technology and energy etc. In 2015,Omidyar reportedly donated $ 270 million worth of his eBay shares to undisclosed(未公开的)charity. So far,he has given away $ 1 billion or so.

The chairman and CEO of the computer manufacturer,Dell,likes to support education,social and human services,the arts and culture,and community development causes. According to Wealth-X,his lifetime donations are about $ 1.1 billion. His foundation promised to donate $ 25 million to build a 211-bed hospital in Austin,Texas.

James Simons is the chairman of Renaissance Technologies, a very successful firm that owns $ 65billion. With his wife Marilyn, he opened the Simons Foundation, which primarily supports educational causes. They have also opened two other organizations in memory of their two sons who died in 1996 and in 2003: the Paul Simons Foundation and the Nick Simons Foundation. Altogether, the Simons couple have made $ 1.2 billion worth of donations.

【小题1】What does the first paragraph imply?
A.All rich businessmen will donate some money to charity.
B.Only by making donations to society can you become rich.
C.Making donations makes a big difference to other people.
D.All successful people make donations out of generosity.
【小题2】Who contributed to charity secretly?
A.James Simons.B.Dietmar Hopp.
C.Pierre Omidyar.D.Dell.
【小题3】What's the purpose of writing this passage?
A.To introduce some outstanding famous people.
B.To make some comments on philanthropy.
C.To offer some suggestions on how to donate.
D.To encourage people to take part in philanthropy.
【小题4】Why is Andrew Carnegie mentioned in the first paragraph?
A.To praise him for his generosity.
B.To introduce the topic.
C.To keep readers informed about him.
D.To make readers think about ways of life.

同类题4

   When I read a post about taking someone to the movies, I remembered something that happened a couple of years ago.

I used to drink Coca-Cola and they had a contest where there was a ___________ inside the bottle cap. You went to a website and entered the code and maybe you _________ something. I won some ___________ Cokes. But then, I won the Grand Prize!I was surprised and ___________.

The Grand Prize was free movies for a year. What that ___________ to be was that the company sent me 52 admission tickets for a local movie theatre — they _________ one movie a week was what free movies for a year _______. All of the tickets had expiration dates(失效期)later than a year from the day I _________ them. I used quite a few taking friends to see _________.

But the best thing I did with them was that I ____________ twenty-two tickets that I had left by that time, to the local Women’s Transition House. It is a place where women and their ____________ could go when they’re ______________ domestic violence or just a bad situation in general and get help to make a ______________ start.

My work team had decided we would be a charity through which we ______________ donations for that particular Christmas. I knew that the Women’s Transition House ______________ some childcare for the women ______________ they could go for job interviews and things like that.

I put those tickets in a(n) ______________ and wrote a note on the outside, asking the Women's Transition House staff to give the movie tickets to women there ____________ the holidays to have something ____________ to do, with or without their children. It made me ____________ happy to do this.

【小题1】
A.websiteB.signC.codeD.note
【小题2】
A.boughtB.wonC.downloadedD.sought
【小题3】
A.expensiveB.cheapC.deliciousD.free
【小题4】
A.skepticalB.delightedC.numbD.jealous
【小题5】
A.turned overB.turned upC.turned outD.turned down
【小题6】
A.figuredB.toleratedC.foresawD.identified
【小题7】
A.occurredB.matteredC.meantD.underlined
【小题8】
A.refusedB.receivedC.presentedD.lost
【小题9】
A.playsB.moviesC.performancesD.matches
【小题10】
A.soldB.abandonedC.distributedD.donated
【小题11】
A.childrenB.partnerC.familyD.parents
【小题12】
A.handlingB.opposingC.fleeingD.defeating
【小题13】
A.steadyB.freshC.completeD.perfect
【小题14】
A.purchasedB.managedC.controlledD.collected
【小题15】
A.providedB.acceptedC.supportedD.postponed
【小题16】
A.butB.soC.otherwiseD.or
【小题17】
A.mailboxB.timetableC.pocketD.envelope
【小题18】
A.toB.beforeC.overD.with
【小题19】
A.controversialB.compulsoryC.entertainingD.systematic
【小题20】
A.reallyB.nearlyC.generallyD.simply