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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very cold on last Monday morning. I was walking on my way to school when I notice two street cleaners cleaning the street in the cold wind. Saw them working so hard on such a cold morning, I was deeply touching and made up my mind to do something for them.
After arriving at school, our classmates gathered together to discuss when we could do help the street cleaners. Some classmate suggested helping with the cleaning. Some suggested bringing any warm clothes to them while others advised getting some hot food to keep us warm. Finally we both agreed on helping with the cleaning and bringing some hot food to them.
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同类题1

   Andrew Carnegie once said,"No man can become rich without himself enriching others. The man who dies rich dies disgraced." Many successful businessmen think about sharing and giving back to their community at some point in their lives,and take part in philanthropy(慈善行为).Some say it is out of generosity,and others believe that it is for tax reasons. One way or another,the money spent for charitable purposes is needed and has some type of impact on someone's life. The following businessmen believe that sharing is caring. They have donated(捐赠)a combined amount of $ 106.8 billion according to research firm Wealth-X.

German Dietmar Hopp co-founded SAP AG,the famous software company. Through his foundation called Dietmar-Hopp-Stiftung,he donated a total of $1 billion to support local education,sports,and health causes in his hometown in Germany. He is worth $ 6.3 billion.

Pierre Omidyar,the French-born Iranian- American businessman is the founder of eBay. In 1998,he started the Omidyar Foundation with his wife. The organization donates to several areas,food,technology and energy etc. In 2015,Omidyar reportedly donated $ 270 million worth of his eBay shares to undisclosed(未公开的)charity. So far,he has given away $ 1 billion or so.

The chairman and CEO of the computer manufacturer,Dell,likes to support education,social and human services,the arts and culture,and community development causes. According to Wealth-X,his lifetime donations are about $ 1.1 billion. His foundation promised to donate $ 25 million to build a 211-bed hospital in Austin,Texas.

James Simons is the chairman of Renaissance Technologies, a very successful firm that owns $ 65billion. With his wife Marilyn, he opened the Simons Foundation, which primarily supports educational causes. They have also opened two other organizations in memory of their two sons who died in 1996 and in 2003: the Paul Simons Foundation and the Nick Simons Foundation. Altogether, the Simons couple have made $ 1.2 billion worth of donations.

【小题1】What does the first paragraph imply?
A.All rich businessmen will donate some money to charity.
B.Only by making donations to society can you become rich.
C.Making donations makes a big difference to other people.
D.All successful people make donations out of generosity.
【小题2】Who contributed to charity secretly?
A.James Simons.B.Dietmar Hopp.
C.Pierre Omidyar.D.Dell.
【小题3】What's the purpose of writing this passage?
A.To introduce some outstanding famous people.
B.To make some comments on philanthropy.
C.To offer some suggestions on how to donate.
D.To encourage people to take part in philanthropy.
【小题4】Why is Andrew Carnegie mentioned in the first paragraph?
A.To praise him for his generosity.
B.To introduce the topic.
C.To keep readers informed about him.
D.To make readers think about ways of life.

同类题3

   Sometimes you meet an ordinary person doing something extraordinary. On a recent trip I met Normand Gallant. Normand is someone you could _____ on the street and never notice but he is a very special person who _____ recognition.

Norm lives in a remote area far from the _____ big hospital, so when his wife _____ cancer several years ago, Norm was faced with a four-hour _____ to where she could be treated. That meant lots of _____ for meals, fuel, hotels and so on. But in the end the cancer took his wife’s life _____.

Norm was obviously _____ by his wife’s passing, and he was quite upset, _____ he realized that other people were ______ the same sorts of hardships. He wanted to do something but he didn’t want to give money to the ______ that support cancer research because he didn’t know how much would actually get to the researchers. What he did was to ______ parties.

About every three weeks on Saturday evenings, there is a party in Norm’s garage. ______ during the evening Norm tells about a family who is having difficulty ______ the cost of supporting a cancer patient in undertaking ______ far from home. Then a pail is passed around and the money is ______, every cent of it goes ______ to that family.

Norm’s personal loss has ______ an act of kindness in ______ of the wife he has lost. Wouldn’t it be ______ if we had more people in the world like Normand Gallant? He makes the world a better place.

【小题1】
A.saveB.greetC.observeD.pass
【小题2】
A.deservesB.dislikesC.avoidsD.achieves
【小题3】
A.bestB.nearestC.cleanestD.cheapest
【小题4】
A.discoveredB.curedC.examinedD.developed
【小题5】
A.flightB.walkC.driveD.wait
【小题6】
A.troubleB.expenseC.effortsD.preparations
【小题7】
A.anywayB.somehowC.meanwhileD.instead
【小题8】
A.impressedB.strickenC.movedD.terrified
【小题9】
A.ifB.althoughC.beforeD.because
【小题10】
A.understandingB.questioningC.facingD.settling
【小题11】
A.doctorsB.familiesC.organizationsD.hospitals
【小题12】
A.attendB.promoteC.holdD.enjoy
【小题13】
A.At some pointB.By this meansC.For some reasonD.In this case
【小题14】
A.affordingB.reducingC.budgetingD.providing
【小题15】
A.researchB.treatmentC.operationD.risk
【小题16】
A.collectedB.paidC.spentD.lent
【小题17】
A.graduallyB.simplyC.directlyD.exactly
【小题18】
A.served asB.resulted fromC.gone throughD.contributed to
【小题19】
A.memoryB.recoveryC.braveryD.kindness
【小题20】
A.interestingB.unusualC.preciousD.nice

同类题5

   Sweetest Day is celebrated on the third Saturday in October as a day to make someone happy. It is an occasion which offers all of us an opportunity to remember not only the sick,the aged,and children who have lost their parents,but also friends,workmates,relatives and neighbors whose helpfulness and kindness we have enjoyed.

Over 60 years ago,when a Cleveland man noticed that some people,such as children who lost their parents and patients who lay in bed,too often felt forgotten and neglected,he developed in his mind the idea of showing them that they were remembered. He did this by giving them small gifts. With the help of his friends and neighbors,he gave those people small gifts on a Saturday in October. During the years that followed,other Clevelanders began to take part in the celebration,which came to be called "Sweetest Day". Over time,the Sweetest Day's idea of spreading cheer to the poor,the sick and children who had lost their parents was broadened(扩大)to include everyone,and became an occasion for remembering others with a kind act or a small gift. Soon the idea spread to other cities all over the USA.

Sweetest Day is not based on any single group's religious beliefs or on a family relationship. It is a reminder(提醒人记忆之物)that a thoughtful word or deed enriches life and gives it meaning. Because of many people remembering to take the form of gift giving,Sweetest Day offers us the opportunity to show others that we care,in a positive way.

【小题1】What can we learn from the first paragraph?
A.Sweetest Day is a day to bring happiness to others.
B.Sweetest Day is just an occasion for caring about disabled people.
C.Sweetest Day is an occasion for lovers to express love.
D.Sweetest Day is celebrated on the third Sunday in October.
【小题2】Which of the following has little relationship to Sweetest Day?
A.Visiting sick people in the hospital.
B.Visiting children who have lost their parents.
C.Giving friends small gifts.
D.Giving flowers to sweethearts.
【小题3】The underlined word "neglected" in the second paragraph means" __________".
A.rememberedB.hated
C.paid little or no attention toD.disappointed
【小题4】What do most people usually do to show their care to others according to the passage?
A.Give them some money.
B.Give them gifts.
C.Send them their regards.
D.Offer help directly.