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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very cold on last Monday morning. I was walking on my way to school when I notice two street cleaners cleaning the street in the cold wind. Saw them working so hard on such a cold morning, I was deeply touching and made up my mind to do something for them.
After arriving at school, our classmates gathered together to discuss when we could do help the street cleaners. Some classmate suggested helping with the cleaning. Some suggested bringing any warm clothes to them while others advised getting some hot food to keep us warm. Finally we both agreed on helping with the cleaning and bringing some hot food to them.
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   In the United States a voluntary organization called Musician Corps is making a difference in people's lives. Five years ago,Kiff Gallagher,the founder of the organization,realized that music and public services could be used together to help Americans in need. Recognizing that music has a positive effect on Alzheimer's disease and autism(自闭症),he had the idea of creating Musician Corps.

Musician Corps looks for musicians and trains them as teachers. Then the musicians provide these services in city schools,children's hospitals,and assisted-living homes for older adults. They also help organize community concerts. Anyone can play music at these community activities.

Kiff Gallagher says what makes Musician Corps different from other charity organizations is that everybody can take part. It provides a place for people to get involved. He remembers a Musician Corps event at a hospital. Afterwards,he says,the patients are less depressed.

David Meletiche, one of 200 musicians in Musician Corps, teaches an after-school guitar class in a high-crime neighborhood. He is excited that the group gives him not only a job in a difficult economy but also the chance to use the team-building skills he gained in college.

There are 12 high school students in his class. Selena Makwan, one of them who are learning to play the guitar, says the program keeps her busy.“It definitely keeps me off the streets, because without this program I probably would be wandering around right now and I would not know what to do. And it also gives me an opportunity to learn something I've never done before.”

Musician Corps has established programs in California and North Carolina. Kiff Gallagher hopes Musician Corps will continue to expand across America.

【小题1】Kiff Gallagher founded Musician Corps to ___________.
A.teach people music
B.help those in need
C.know better about sick people
D.offer jobs in a difficult economy
【小题2】What makes Musician Corps unique compared with other charity organizations?
A.It is open to anyone.
B.Its members are all musicians.
C.It can make people less depressed.
D.It teaches music in high-crime neighborhoods.
【小题3】From Paragraph 4, we can know that David Meletiche ___________.
A.loves his job as a guitar teacher
B.has to make a living as a guitar teacher
C.changed his job during economic depression
D.used the team-building skills when he was in college
【小题4】According to Selena Makwan, we can know that she ___________.
A.wants to be a guitarist in the future
B.likes to wander around the streets
C.benefits a lot from Musician Corps
D.wants to be a member of Musician Corps

同类题5

   In the United States a voluntary organization called Musician Corps is making a difference in people's lives. Five years ago,Kiff Gallagher,the founder of the organization,realized that music and public services could be used together to help Americans in need. Recognizing that music has a positive effect on Alzheimer's disease and autism(自闭症),he had the idea of creating Musician Corps.

Musician Corps looks for musicians and trains them as teachers. Then the musicians provide these services in city schools,children's hospitals,and assisted-living homes for older adults. They also help organize community concerts. Anyone can play music at these community activities.

Kiff Gallagher says what makes Musician Corps different from other charity organizations is that everybody can take part. It provides a place for people to get involved. He remembers a Musician Corps event at a hospital. Afterwards,he says,the patients are less depressed.

David Meletiche, one of 200 musicians in Musician Corps, teaches an after-school guitar class in a high-crime neighborhood. He is excited that the group gives him not only a job in a difficult economy but also the chance to use the team-building skills he gained in college.

There are 12 high school students in his class. Selena Makwan, one of them who are learning to play the guitar, says the program keeps her busy. "It definitely keeps me off the streets, because without this program I probably would be wandering around right now and I would not know what to do. And it also gives me an opportunity to learn something I' ve never done before."

Musician Corps has established programs in California and North Carolina. Kiff Gallagher hopes Musician Corps will continue to expand across America.

【小题1】Kiff Gallagher founded Musician Corps to ________.
A.teach people music
B.help those in need
C.know better about sick people
D.offer jobs in a difficult economy
【小题2】What can we know about Musician Corps from the passage?
A.It supplies public services through music.
B.Its main task is to train more musicians.
C.It has many professional music teachers.
D.Its community concerts are popular with students.
【小题3】From Paragraph 4, we can know that David Meletiche ________.
A.loves his job as a guitar teacher
B.has to make a living as a guitar teacher
C.changed his job during economic depression
D.used the team-building skills when he was in college
【小题4】We can infer that Selena Makwan ________.
A.wants to be a guitarist in the future
B.likes to wander around the streets
C.benefits a lot from Musician Corps
D.wants to be a member of Musician Corps