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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very cold on last Monday morning. I was walking on my way to school when I notice two street cleaners cleaning the street in the cold wind. Saw them working so hard on such a cold morning, I was deeply touching and made up my mind to do something for them.
After arriving at school, our classmates gathered together to discuss when we could do help the street cleaners. Some classmate suggested helping with the cleaning. Some suggested bringing any warm clothes to them while others advised getting some hot food to keep us warm. Finally we both agreed on helping with the cleaning and bringing some hot food to them.
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同类题2

   I am a social worker. I wanted to tell everyone about my very dear friend who passed away a few months ago. I met him many years ago while doing my internship(实习期的工作)in the county prison. He was _________a program he had designed to help prisoners with drug and alcohol problems. He was always _________ new ways to bring hope and help to these men and their _________.One of his favorite _________was the Toy Drive he would run every Christmas for the children of the prisoners. He did this for twenty years _________his sudden death. As Christmas _________,I decided that this tradition had to be _________,for the children as well as the _________ of my friend.

But the file where he kept the names of the people who had helped him over the years had gone _________.I had to start anew(重新)and with very little __________!I started making phone calls,explaining about the project and my __________.I prayed every night that the event would,__________,be worthy of my friend. To my great __________,individuals,organizations and businesses began to come on board and,__________,I had enough toys to give to all the children of the prisoners with some left over for the local community __________!

When Christmas Eve finally arrived,I felt very happy,thinking I had done all I could do and reflecting(认真思考)on what a(n)__________it had been for me. I was bagging up the remaining toys __________ if there was anyone left who might like them. Then my phone rang.

It was my daughter. She __________to explain about a woman she knew in Kentucky who had five children,one seriously ill,no husband,no heating in the home,no toys!Ohh —how could we not help her?

My daughter and I drove all night,from New York to Kentucky,and those children woke up in a nice warm house with plenty of __________!My friend's __________of kindness lived on that year,reaching all the way to Kentucky!

【小题1】
A.recordingB.directingC.attendingD.improving
【小题2】
A.coming up withB.catching up withC.keeping up withD.putting up with
【小题3】
A.companyB.familyC.groupD.club
【小题4】
A.hobbiesB.sportsC.eventsD.games
【小题5】
A.untilB.afterC.behindD.since
【小题6】
A.finishedB.arrivedC.followedD.approached
【小题7】
A.lived onB.relied onC.carried onD.agreed on
【小题8】
A.pleasureB.memoryC.benefitD.favor
【小题9】
A.extraB.hidingC.activeD.missing
【小题10】
A.energyB.timeC.pressureD.confidence
【小题11】
A.difficultiesB.impressionC.fearsD.dreams
【小题12】
A.howeverB.thoughC.otherwiseD.somehow
【小题13】
A.disappointmentB.curiosityC.puzzlementD.relief
【小题14】
A.absolutelyB.eventuallyC.generallyD.occasionally
【小题15】
A.as wellB.at firstC.in particularD.once more
【小题16】
A.pityB.honorC.burdenD.discovery
【小题17】
A.wonderingB.realizingC.predictingD.evaluating
【小题18】
A.cameB.droveC.calledD.returned
【小题19】
A.candiesB.flowersC.chocolatesD.toys
【小题20】
A.courageB.spiritC.positionD.attention

同类题4

   Andrew Carnegie once said,"No man can become rich without himself enriching others. The man who dies rich dies disgraced." Many successful businessmen think about sharing and giving back to their community at some point in their lives,and take part in philanthropy(慈善行为).Some say it is out of generosity,and others believe that it is for tax reasons. One way or another,the money spent for charitable purposes is needed and has some type of impact on someone's life. The following businessmen believe that sharing is caring. They have donated(捐赠)a combined amount of $ 106.8 billion according to research firm Wealth-X.

German Dietmar Hopp co-founded SAP AG,the famous software company. Through his foundation called Dietmar-Hopp-Stiftung,he donated a total of $1 billion to support local education,sports,and health causes in his hometown in Germany. He is worth $ 6.3 billion.

Pierre Omidyar,the French-born Iranian- American businessman is the founder of eBay. In 1998,he started the Omidyar Foundation with his wife. The organization donates to several areas,food,technology and energy etc. In 2015,Omidyar reportedly donated $ 270 million worth of his eBay shares to undisclosed(未公开的)charity. So far,he has given away $ 1 billion or so.

The chairman and CEO of the computer manufacturer,Dell,likes to support education,social and human services,the arts and culture,and community development causes. According to Wealth-X,his lifetime donations are about $ 1.1 billion. His foundation promised to donate $ 25 million to build a 211-bed hospital in Austin,Texas.

James Simons is the chairman of Renaissance Technologies, a very successful firm that owns $ 65billion. With his wife Marilyn, he opened the Simons Foundation, which primarily supports educational causes. They have also opened two other organizations in memory of their two sons who died in 1996 and in 2003: the Paul Simons Foundation and the Nick Simons Foundation. Altogether, the Simons couple have made $ 1.2 billion worth of donations.

【小题1】What does the first paragraph imply?
A.All rich businessmen will donate some money to charity.
B.Only by making donations to society can you become rich.
C.Making donations makes a big difference to other people.
D.All successful people make donations out of generosity.
【小题2】Who contributed to charity secretly?
A.James Simons.B.Dietmar Hopp.
C.Pierre Omidyar.D.Dell.
【小题3】What's the purpose of writing this passage?
A.To introduce some outstanding famous people.
B.To make some comments on philanthropy.
C.To offer some suggestions on how to donate.
D.To encourage people to take part in philanthropy.
【小题4】Why is Andrew Carnegie mentioned in the first paragraph?
A.To praise him for his generosity.
B.To introduce the topic.
C.To keep readers informed about him.
D.To make readers think about ways of life.