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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very cold on last Monday morning. I was walking on my way to school when I notice two street cleaners cleaning the street in the cold wind. Saw them working so hard on such a cold morning, I was deeply touching and made up my mind to do something for them.
After arriving at school, our classmates gathered together to discuss when we could do help the street cleaners. Some classmate suggested helping with the cleaning. Some suggested bringing any warm clothes to them while others advised getting some hot food to keep us warm. Finally we both agreed on helping with the cleaning and bringing some hot food to them.
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同类题1

   Sweetest Day is celebrated on the third Saturday in October as a day to make someone happy. It is an occasion which offers all of us an opportunity to remember not only the sick,the aged,and children who have lost their parents,but also friends,workmates,relatives and neighbors whose helpfulness and kindness we have enjoyed.

Over 60 years ago,when a Cleveland man noticed that some people,such as children who lost their parents and patients who lay in bed,too often felt forgotten and neglected,he developed in his mind the idea of showing them that they were remembered. He did this by giving them small gifts. With the help of his friends and neighbors,he gave those people small gifts on a Saturday in October. During the years that followed,other Clevelanders began to take part in the celebration,which came to be called "Sweetest Day". Over time,the Sweetest Day's idea of spreading cheer to the poor,the sick and children who had lost their parents was broadened(扩大)to include everyone,and became an occasion for remembering others with a kind act or a small gift. Soon the idea spread to other cities all over the USA.

Sweetest Day is not based on any single group's religious beliefs or on a family relationship. It is a reminder(提醒人记忆之物)that a thoughtful word or deed enriches life and gives it meaning. Because of many people remembering to take the form of gift giving,Sweetest Day offers us the opportunity to show others that we care,in a positive way.

【小题1】What can we learn from the first paragraph?
A.Sweetest Day is a day to bring happiness to others.
B.Sweetest Day is just an occasion for caring about disabled people.
C.Sweetest Day is an occasion for lovers to express love.
D.Sweetest Day is celebrated on the third Sunday in October.
【小题2】Which of the following has little relationship to Sweetest Day?
A.Visiting sick people in the hospital.
B.Visiting children who have lost their parents.
C.Giving friends small gifts.
D.Giving flowers to sweethearts.
【小题3】The underlined word "neglected" in the second paragraph means" __________".
A.rememberedB.hated
C.paid little or no attention toD.disappointed
【小题4】What do most people usually do to show their care to others according to the passage?
A.Give them some money.
B.Give them gifts.
C.Send them their regards.
D.Offer help directly.

同类题2

Volunteering and its Surprising Benefits

In today's busy society, it can be hard to think about finding time to volunteer. _____ , the benefits of volunteering are enormous(巨大的), both to you and to the community. The right match can help you find friends, reach out to the community, learn new skills and even _____ your career. Volunteering can even help protect your mental and physical health.

One of the better-known benefits of volunteering is the ____ on the community. Unpaid volunteers are often the glue(胶水) that holds a community together. Volunteering allows you to ____ your community and make it a better place.

One of the best ______ to make new friends and strengthen existing relationships is to _____ to a shared activity together. Volunteering is a great way to meet new people, _____ if you are  new to an area. Volunteering also strengthens your ____ to the community and broadens your support network, ___ you to people with common interests, neighbourhood resources, and fun and fulfilling activities.

 ___ some people are naturally outgoing,others are _____ and have a hard time meeting new people. Volunteering gives you the _____ to practise and develop your social skills, since you are meeting regularly with a group of people with _____ interests. Once you have motivation, it's easier to branch out and  make more friends and contacts.

Volunteering can provide a healthy boost (激励)to your self-confidence, self-esteem and life satisfaction. You are doing good for others and the community , which ______ a natural sense of accomplishment. Your ____ as a volunteer can also give you a sense of pride and identity. And the better you feel about yourself, the more ______ you are to have a positive view of your life and future goals.

 _____ the risk of depression is another important benefit of volunteering. A key ____ in depression is social isolation(孤立). Volunteering _____ you in regular contact with others and helps you develop a solid support system, which ______ protects you against stress and depression when you' re going through challenging times.

【小题1】
A.FurthermoreB.HoweverC.MeanwhileD.Therefore
【小题2】
A.formB.affectC.changeD.advance
【小题3】
A.impactB.emphasisC.developmentD.comment
【小题4】
A.agree withB.benefit fromC.connect toD.join in
【小题5】
A.applicationB.goalsC.waysD.attitude
【小题6】
A.commitB.belongC.agreeD.relate
【小题7】
A.typicallyB.possiblyC.especiallyD.essentially
【小题8】
A.reactionsB.tiesC.contributionsD.attachments
【小题9】
A.referringB.associatingC.accompanyingD.exposing
【小题10】
A.WhileB.SinceC.IfD.As
【小题11】
A.modestB.shyC.easy-goingD.proud
【小题12】
A.opportunityB.occasionC.challengeD.condition
【小题13】
A.specialB.commonC.strangeD.rare
【小题14】
A.acquiresB.servesC.remindsD.provides
【小题15】
A.roleB.actionC.performanceD.responsibility
【小题16】
A.capableB.availableC.convenientD.likely
【小题17】
A.TakingB.ReducingC.DevelopingD.Facing
【小题18】
A.conceptB.phenomenonC.factorD.meaning
【小题19】
A.educatesB.leadsC.keepsD.informs
【小题20】
A.in additionB.in turnC.in vainD.in response

同类题3

   In the town of Whitesburg, Kentucky, Mick Polly, who lives with his teenage daughter Carolina in a white house, is known as the bike man. Over the past five years, Mick has built hundreds of _______ for needy kids.

One day, a 13-year-old boy with a(n) _______ bike walked by Mick’s house. “When I was working in my _______, he approached me, saying he had an accident, and asked if I could _______ it, “says Mick. The boy left his bike to Mick who asked friends _______ the Internet if they had the missing _______. The town’s former police chief saw the _______ and donated two used bicycles. Mick took parts from each to _______ a new set of wheels for the boy.

Soon after, Mick, who owns a toy business, repaired a bike for the boy’s brother and assembled(组装)one for his sister. _______ spread, and within the year, he had fixed up dozens of bikes for local kids whose parents couldn’t ________ to buy new ones. “People were always dropping off bikes day and night,” says Mick.

Mick ________ these bikes and bike parts in his garage. “I ________ the good tires or the handlebars or the seat and use them, “he says. So far, the bike man has repaired hundreds of bicycles and ________ nearly 700 newly constructed bikes. They’re ________, but the kids must agree to two things: They’ve got to “remember who is ________ them”, and they’ve got to try in school. If a kid’s grades are ________, Mick willrequire a teacher’s ________ “saying that you're doing your best”.

Mick also ________ the bikes will get kids off the sofa. “When I was growing up, we all ________ our bikes, “he says. ”________ these kids can get some exercise. ”

【小题1】
A.trucksB.toysC.bicyclesD.carriages
【小题2】
A.brokenB.usedC.portableD.elegant
【小题3】
A.fieldB.companyC.garageD.office
【小题4】
A.handleB.fixC.combineD.construct
【小题5】
A.beyondB.alongC.outsideD.through
【小题6】
A.lightB.seatC.tireD.component
【小题7】
A.postB.arrangementC.noticeD.advertisement
【小题8】
A.scanB.engineerC.polishD.equip
【小题9】
A.AdviceB.AssistanceC.WordD.Donation
【小题10】
A.decideB.attemptC.guaranteeD.afford
【小题11】
A.hidesB.rejectsC.storesD.distributes
【小题12】
A.removeB.replaceC.exchangeD.decorate
【小题13】
A.set asideB.given awayC.put awayD.taken out
【小题14】
A.freeB.usefulC.valuableD.suitable
【小题15】
A.helpingB.teachingC.opposingD.ridding
【小题16】
A.unchangedB.increasingC.lowD.satisfying
【小题17】
A.noteB.explanationC.suggestionD.reply
【小题18】
A.pretendsB.admitsC.enviesD.hopes
【小题19】
A.ownedB.rodeC.boughtD.sacrificed
【小题20】
A.HopefullyB.DisappointinglyC.EmbarrassinglyD.Excitingly

同类题5

   When I read a post about taking someone to the movies, I remembered something that happened a couple of years ago.

I used to drink Coca-Cola and they had a contest where there was a ___________ inside the bottle cap. You went to a website and entered the code and maybe you _________ something. I won some ___________ Cokes. But then, I won the Grand Prize!I was surprised and ___________.

The Grand Prize was free movies for a year. What that ___________ to be was that the company sent me 52 admission tickets for a local movie theatre — they _________ one movie a week was what free movies for a year _______. All of the tickets had expiration dates(失效期)later than a year from the day I _________ them. I used quite a few taking friends to see _________.

But the best thing I did with them was that I ____________ twenty-two tickets that I had left by that time, to the local Women’s Transition House. It is a place where women and their ____________ could go when they’re ______________ domestic violence or just a bad situation in general and get help to make a ______________ start.

My work team had decided we would be a charity through which we ______________ donations for that particular Christmas. I knew that the Women’s Transition House ______________ some childcare for the women ______________ they could go for job interviews and things like that.

I put those tickets in a(n) ______________ and wrote a note on the outside, asking the Women's Transition House staff to give the movie tickets to women there ____________ the holidays to have something ____________ to do, with or without their children. It made me ____________ happy to do this.

【小题1】
A.websiteB.signC.codeD.note
【小题2】
A.boughtB.wonC.downloadedD.sought
【小题3】
A.expensiveB.cheapC.deliciousD.free
【小题4】
A.skepticalB.delightedC.numbD.jealous
【小题5】
A.turned overB.turned upC.turned outD.turned down
【小题6】
A.figuredB.toleratedC.foresawD.identified
【小题7】
A.occurredB.matteredC.meantD.underlined
【小题8】
A.refusedB.receivedC.presentedD.lost
【小题9】
A.playsB.moviesC.performancesD.matches
【小题10】
A.soldB.abandonedC.distributedD.donated
【小题11】
A.childrenB.partnerC.familyD.parents
【小题12】
A.handlingB.opposingC.fleeingD.defeating
【小题13】
A.steadyB.freshC.completeD.perfect
【小题14】
A.purchasedB.managedC.controlledD.collected
【小题15】
A.providedB.acceptedC.supportedD.postponed
【小题16】
A.butB.soC.otherwiseD.or
【小题17】
A.mailboxB.timetableC.pocketD.envelope
【小题18】
A.toB.beforeC.overD.with
【小题19】
A.controversialB.compulsoryC.entertainingD.systematic
【小题20】
A.reallyB.nearlyC.generallyD.simply