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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very cold on last Monday morning. I was walking on my way to school when I notice two street cleaners cleaning the street in the cold wind. Saw them working so hard on such a cold morning, I was deeply touching and made up my mind to do something for them.
After arriving at school, our classmates gathered together to discuss when we could do help the street cleaners. Some classmate suggested helping with the cleaning. Some suggested bringing any warm clothes to them while others advised getting some hot food to keep us warm. Finally we both agreed on helping with the cleaning and bringing some hot food to them.
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同类题1

   I am a volunteer in the Friendly Visiting program. I visit a(n) _______ who does not seem _______ because her son and grandchildren live upstairs with her. _______, she has a special disease and _______ this condition she cannot _______ the house alone. For whatever reasons, her family is too nervous and it's _______ to take her out of the house with her oxygen tank. I admit at first I was _______ too! But she is a fiercely independent lady and can _______ it with ease.
Since her loneliness comes from staying _______ so long, we meet about every other week. We go to IHOP and I get to ________ her amazing stories such as when she first moved to Boston from Ireland, how she first ________ her husband and things about her large family. She often ________ at the end of our meetings, saying I had no ________ to cut in. I am a chatty person but with her all I want to do is ________. Often, her family members have heard these ________ and may take them for granted, but for me they are ________ and interesting. We often stay at IHOP for two hours ________ the free coffee.
It is nice to know that when I stay with her she is not lonely ________. But I also see the real ________ our meetings make. There have been times when, because of her ________ issues, we have not seen one another for a month or two and we miss each other terribly. I feel very lucky to have a friend like her.
【小题1】
A.teacherB.doctorC.childD.elder
【小题2】
A.upsetB.disappointedC.lonelyD.terrified
【小题3】
A.ThereforeB.HoweverC.OtherwiseD.Moreover
【小题4】
A.due toB.instead ofC.beyondD.without
【小题5】
A.occupyB.repairC.leaveD.decorate
【小题6】
A.eagerB.heartbrokenC.shockedD.inconvenient
【小题7】
A.painfulB.nervousC.desperateD.voluntary
【小题8】
A.finishB.handleC.throwD.cure
【小题9】
A.indoorsB.silentC.upstairsD.healthy
【小题10】
A.tellB.writeC.hearD.record
【小题11】
A.identifiedB.recognizedC.understoodD.met
【小题12】
A.apologizesB.complainsC.criesD.responds
【小题13】
A.rightB.desireC.chanceD.doubt
【小题14】
A.laughB.listenC.refuseD.argue
【小题15】
A.storiesB.songsC.suggestionsD.poems
【小题16】
A.embarrassingB.newC.similarD.necessary
【小题17】
A.giving awayB.looking forward toC.focusing onD.taking advantage of
【小题18】
A.completelyB.possiblyC.regularlyD.truly
【小题19】
A.troubleB.progressC.differenceD.adjustment
【小题20】
A.marriageB.familyC.addressD.health

同类题2

Volunteering and its Surprising Benefits

In today's busy society, it can be hard to think about finding time to volunteer. _____ , the benefits of volunteering are enormous(巨大的), both to you and to the community. The right match can help you find friends, reach out to the community, learn new skills and even _____ your career. Volunteering can even help protect your mental and physical health.

One of the better-known benefits of volunteering is the ____ on the community. Unpaid volunteers are often the glue(胶水) that holds a community together. Volunteering allows you to ____ your community and make it a better place.

One of the best ______ to make new friends and strengthen existing relationships is to _____ to a shared activity together. Volunteering is a great way to meet new people, _____ if you are  new to an area. Volunteering also strengthens your ____ to the community and broadens your support network, ___ you to people with common interests, neighbourhood resources, and fun and fulfilling activities.

 ___ some people are naturally outgoing,others are _____ and have a hard time meeting new people. Volunteering gives you the _____ to practise and develop your social skills, since you are meeting regularly with a group of people with _____ interests. Once you have motivation, it's easier to branch out and  make more friends and contacts.

Volunteering can provide a healthy boost (激励)to your self-confidence, self-esteem and life satisfaction. You are doing good for others and the community , which ______ a natural sense of accomplishment. Your ____ as a volunteer can also give you a sense of pride and identity. And the better you feel about yourself, the more ______ you are to have a positive view of your life and future goals.

 _____ the risk of depression is another important benefit of volunteering. A key ____ in depression is social isolation(孤立). Volunteering _____ you in regular contact with others and helps you develop a solid support system, which ______ protects you against stress and depression when you' re going through challenging times.

【小题1】
A.FurthermoreB.HoweverC.MeanwhileD.Therefore
【小题2】
A.formB.affectC.changeD.advance
【小题3】
A.impactB.emphasisC.developmentD.comment
【小题4】
A.agree withB.benefit fromC.connect toD.join in
【小题5】
A.applicationB.goalsC.waysD.attitude
【小题6】
A.commitB.belongC.agreeD.relate
【小题7】
A.typicallyB.possiblyC.especiallyD.essentially
【小题8】
A.reactionsB.tiesC.contributionsD.attachments
【小题9】
A.referringB.associatingC.accompanyingD.exposing
【小题10】
A.WhileB.SinceC.IfD.As
【小题11】
A.modestB.shyC.easy-goingD.proud
【小题12】
A.opportunityB.occasionC.challengeD.condition
【小题13】
A.specialB.commonC.strangeD.rare
【小题14】
A.acquiresB.servesC.remindsD.provides
【小题15】
A.roleB.actionC.performanceD.responsibility
【小题16】
A.capableB.availableC.convenientD.likely
【小题17】
A.TakingB.ReducingC.DevelopingD.Facing
【小题18】
A.conceptB.phenomenonC.factorD.meaning
【小题19】
A.educatesB.leadsC.keepsD.informs
【小题20】
A.in additionB.in turnC.in vainD.in response

同类题4

   I am a social worker. I wanted to tell everyone about my very dear friend who passed away a few months ago. I met him many years ago while doing my internship(实习期的工作)in the county prison. He was _____ a program he had designed to help prisoners with drug and alcohol problems. He was always _____ new ways to bring hope and help to these men and their _____. One of his favorite _____ was the Toy Drive he would run every Christmas for the children of the prisoners. He did this for twenty years _____ his sudden death. As the Christmas _____ ,I decided that this tradition had to be _____,for the children as well as in _____ of my friend.

But the file where he kept the names of the people who had helped him over the years had gone _____. I had to start anew(重新)and with very little ______ !I started making phone calls,explaining the project and my ____ . I prayed every night that the event would,______,be worthy of my friend. To my great ______,individuals,organizations and businesses began to come on board and,______,I had enough toys to give to all the children of the prisoners with some left over for the local community ______!

When Christmas Eve finally arrived,I felt very happy,thinking I had done all I could do and reflecting(认真思考)on what a(n)______ it had been for me. I was bagging up the remaining toys ______ if there was anyone left who might like them. Then my phone rang.

It was my daughter. She ______ to explain about a woman she knew in Kentucky who had five children,one seriously ill,no husband,no heating in the home,no toys!Ohh—how could we not help her?

My daughter and I drove all night,from New York to Kentucky,and those children woke up in a nice warm house with plenty of ______!My friend's ______ of kindness lived on that year,reaching all the way to Kentucky!

【小题1】A. recording B. directing C. attending D. improving
【小题2】A. coming up with B. catching up with C. keeping up with  D. puting up with
【小题3】A. company B. family    C. group     D. club
【小题4】A. hobbies   B. sports     C. events     D. games
【小题5】A. until B. after C. for D. since
【小题6】A. finished  B. arrived    C. followed D. approached
【小题7】A. lived on  B. relied on C. carried on D. carried out
【小题8】A. pleasure  B. memory C. benefit    D. favor
【小题9】A. extra B. hiding     C. Active    D. missing
【小题10】A. energy  B. time C. pressure D. confidence
【小题11】A. difficulties B. impressions C. fears    D. dreams
【小题12】A. however B. though    C. otherwise D. somehow
【小题13】A. disappointment B. curiosity C. puzzlement  D. relief
【小题14】A. absolutely B. eventually C. generally D. occasionally
【小题15】A. as well  B. at first    C. in particular     D. once more
【小题16】A. pity B. honor     C. burden    D. discovery
【小题17】A. wondering B. realizing C. predicting    D. evaluating
【小题18】A. came B. drove C. called     D. returned
【小题19】A. candies  B. flowers   C. chocolates D. toys
【小题20】A. courage B. spirit C. position D. attention