题干
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One of my happier days was hearing that I was admitted into a medical school. It has been a dream of me for as long as I can remember. My father played big role in my desire to become a physician. See him live a life of services to others inspired me from a young age. Watching him to put on his white coat with the stethoscope（听诊器）around his neck was liked looking at a superhero. Hearing him share stories of how medical care saved patients' lives was enjoyable. As for me, medicine were the perfect mixture of wonder and science, that deeply attracted me.
答案(点此获取答案解析）
①happier→happiest； ②has→had ； ③me→mine； ④在play和big之间加a； ⑤See→Seeing ； ⑥services→service； ⑦删掉to ； ⑧liked→like ； ⑨were→was；⑩that→which
