根据以上图表信息，解答下列问题：

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    Last Saturday afternoon, a charity sale held on our school playground. Although it was no easy task, students active participated in it.

    To organize it successfully, we' made full preparations. After the sale, from the students we collected variously second-hand goods which were still in good condition and classify them. Then came the big day. With all the teachers and students involve, the activity turned out to be successful. We raised 5,000 yuan for total at the end of the activity. All the money we raised up will go to the students from poor family to help finish their studies. It's so a meaningful activity that students look forward to the next charity sale.

在“全民读书月”中，光明中学举行了“名著书评”活动，同学们写出了许多高度概括、语言精炼的书评，读罢令人同味无穷，拍案叫绝。例如：

《伊索寓言》：简洁的故事蕴含着深刻的道理，给人以思想的启迪。

《格列佛游记》：清新的文字，奇异的想像，辛辣的讽刺，将读者带入一个奇异的幻境。

请仿照以上书评的形式，在下列名著中任选一部写上精彩的短评。（可从作品的主题思想、主要内容、艺术特色以及自己的阅读感受等方面来写）

①《钢铁是怎样炼成的》：____。

②《骆驼祥子》：____。