假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不计分。

    With Teachers' Day draw near, I would like to express my thanks to Ms. Li, who taught my English last year.

    At that time, I was having a trouble studying English and my scores fell. Ms. Li encouraged me and tell me her story that she never gave up before her studies didn't go well. She also said that it was necessary to make efforts so that I would not regret waste time. Her words were the best medicine because she stood in her shoes to deal with problems and gave me helpful advices. She didn't simple comfort me. Her teaching methods also worked. It had never occurred me that studying could be so interested until I met Ms. Li.

    My name is John. I am a pupil. I like to read books on Sundays. I live in a house beside the zoo. It's near the school. So I walk to school every day. Tom is my friend. He lives far from the school, so he goes to school by bus. He likes to play on the computer on Sundays.

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根据语篇内容，用方框中所给词的正确形式填空，使短文通顺、连贯。

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    One day, while I was sitting in my car in a parking area,I noticed a young boy in front of my car. “What is the boy doing?” I asked myself and looked closely. “Oh, he is ____up a coin from the ground.”When he ____up, we saw each other ____.He was not ____  than ten and was wearing one blue glove (手套) and one brown glove. His coat was too ____for him.

    As he walked away, I saw his ____, which were too old to wear. I rolled down my window and called him over. I asked him if he ____some money. He replied, “No.That's okay.”

    The parking area was wet. I could tell that his____were cold because he kept moving his weight from one foot to the other.

“Please,” I held out a five-dollar bill(钞票). “It's not much, but when the money is shared, it is much more ____,” I said.

He took off one of his gloves and took the money from my hand. His small hand was red and cold.

    He smiled and went away after saying “Thank you!”to me. That smile made me  ____warm in the cold winter.