英语课上，老师要求同桌相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修。共有10处销误，每句中最多有两处。铝误涉及一个单词的增加、到除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出改加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横钱，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Hui, my friend in high school,has dreamed becoming a cartoon artist since she was young. To her disappointed,her parents don't agree with her decision at first Therefore,Li Hui would not change her mind.She worked hardly to perfect her skills.Just before he finished high school,the chance came:the famous art school was holding a cartoon drawing competition The first three winners would be given a scholarship to study drawing there. Li Hui told herself not to missing the chance.She readily entered the competition and came second. She is now a student in that school and I feel certain what her dream would come true.
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