要求：（1）除诗歌外，文体不限，但文体特征鲜明；（2）不少于800字；（3）不得抄袭、套作；（4）不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；（5）卷面整洁，书写工整。

____元

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are different kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think we'd better to have more outdoor activities. As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But it is a good idea to play ball games, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic. Our brains also need changes to make itself smart and active. In a word, exercise is good for health.

“我以无可言状的悲怆追忆那血腥的风雨，我以颤抖的手抚摸那30万亡灵的冤魂，我以赤诚之心刻下这苦难民族的伤痛。我祈求，我期望，古老民族的觉醒，精神的觉醒。”这段发言最适宜放在（     ）