增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意:1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2）只允许修改10处,多者(从第1处起)不计分。

    When I was young, I was terribly poor in the Chinese. Be afraid of expressing myself was one of the reasons why I rarely did well in school. Once I failed in a mid-term exam. When I got the papers, I realized things could have been better if I listened to the teacher much more attentive. So I turned to my teacher for helps and he told me, “Where there is a will, there is a way. If you are devoted to learn Chinese, you'll make it.” I couldn't agree much. From then on, I began to work harder. Out of my expect, I made great progress soon. Today, Chinese is which my strength lies. And I'm grateful for my Chinese teacher.

阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。

   我们静下来就会发现，身边的噪音实在太多了：表扬的噪音，批评的噪音，谩骂的噪音，嘲笑的噪音，后悔的噪音，得意的噪音，嫉妒的噪音，恼怒的噪音……我们还会发现，沉默也实在不少：对美好沉默，对丑恶沉默，对真理沉默，对谬论沉默，对善良沉默，对凶残沉默……

   在面对噪音与沉默的时候，我们就会觉得生活中有些东西实在紧缺甚至稀有了。

   读过上面的文字，你有怎样的感触或思考呢？请自定角度，自选立意，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章。

   要求：选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要脱离材料内容及含意作文，不要套作，不得抄袭。