哥本哈根为丹麦首都，位于丹麦东部的西兰岛上。现今的大哥本哈根拥有全国560万人中的180万人口，面积约2800平方千米。该城市在1947年提出“手指规划”（如图所示），该规划为哥本哈根后来的城市发展奠定了基础，并影响至今。经过半个多世纪，该城市一直在按“手指”规划发展并不断完善。此规划对人口超百万的大城市发展所产生的积极影响，突出表现在(   )

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Dear Jack,

    How is everything going recently? I'm writing to tell you something more about my birthday. The other day we hold aparty to celebrate my 18th birthday. I received many presents from my friends and parents, including cards, books, CDs or so on. During the party we sang and danced, having good time. I thanked my friends for his help and company. At the meantime, I showed my sincere appreciation to my parents for bringing me up. Now I grow up, that means I should shoulder more responsibilities. I'll try my best to share more houseworks to reduce their burden. It's high time that I dosomething to repay them.

    How did you celebrate your 18th birthday? I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours Sincerely

                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Jin

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