假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Are you afraid of delivering a speech before people?I can well remember his first speech which was titled A Real Test in My Life at the age of 9!You can't imagine how terrible shy I was the moment I thought of that—with so many eyes fixed in me.I have no choice but prepare for it,though.When a real moment came,I stood on the platform with my legs trembled and my mind blank.Although it was hard for me to find myself back,but I made it!From then on,I gradually turned out to be a great speakers without any fear of talking.
