假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In a freezing cold day in January 1994,Jiesang Suonandajie found what he was looking for—a group of poacher who were killing the endangered Tibetan antelope.Jiesang knows he had to move quickly.He shouted to the poachers to put away their guns.Although being surprised,the poachers had a advantage there were more of them.In the battle what followed Jiesang was shot and killed.When its frozen body was found hours late,he was still holding his gun. He had given his life save the Tibetan antelope.
