①My school looks similar from the one in the picture.
②They reach for excellence, not just in classroom achievements also in the development of character.
③Next to the table is her books which she read the night before.
④There is a serious competition for a place at university.
⑤Pupils have to repeat after the teacher again.
⑥They live in a society which education is very important.
⑦She gets home at midnight and falls asleep, completely exhausting.
⑧They continue their commitment to being their best at all time.
⑨I felt too shy that I didn't dare to say anything before the class.
⑩I had to go to school without breakfast in hurry.
②also→but(或者also前添加but)
③is→are
④去掉a
⑤去掉again (或者把repeat改为read)
⑥which前加in(或者把which 改为where)
⑦exhausting→exhausted
⑧time→times
⑨too→so
⑩in和hurry之间加a