I'm Li Hua. I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had already filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format(格式). However,I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attaching?Would you mind find out the mistakes with regard as the words and format?Besides,I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.
I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor.I am looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua