假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, my friends or I went on our trip to People’s Park, that we had a good time. We arrived at park later because of the traffic jam. First, we rode the roller coaster(过山车), which was really excited. After lunch, we went on the water rides — my most favorite! Although we got so wet, we still feel very delighted. The most unforgettable was several photos take when we were riding the water rides. I had my eyes closed and was screaming with my mouth wide open. By this trip, I feel that proper relaxation can reduce us pressure in life and study.