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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
My name is Li Hua. I am a active boy and I talk much than listen . When I talk with my friends, I’m always ready to express me . I’m not afraid to tell others how I think . I am usually the focus of attention because of I often have lots of ideas that interests everyone . In my opinion , people should share and exchange each other’s ideas . But when I am with the quiet people. I felt as if the air were frozen . I’m always trying to find a topic and start a conversation . By this way , people will like me and feel happy.
In word , I am friendly and active and I can make everybody so happy as me.
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